author-san continues as it is, your story is good, only change it if you think it's bad

I've already read the first version of this story, and I particularly like this new one more, it features more characters and shows more consistency, author-san don't give up on this novel, it's very good, I hope he presents more series from the JK saga, they never appear in novel of the genre

Ntr scoot perfect

It's not so strange that we haven't defeated the colossus, it's just at the beginning, and it doesn't even have a devil trigger yet, I hope the Author shows more of the DMC mythology, and maybe changes something as an example, rebellion and very dull in the rebut, maybe he will win yamato, help

I prefer the solo leving system, generally just using the power of the shadow monarch. I would like to see the other monarchs like the monarch of ice elves, or monarchs of beasts.

E The king of fighters, Orochi e rugal.

I'm armed, so I want 5 girls in the harem, otherwise I'll be very insistent

Lissana and Silva The lovesss

no matter how strong it serves. he doesn't have the strength to beat the dragon king. He is at least level 600. The MC needs to have level 250 skills at almost the maximum. to have a chance. In this case, black clover. I had an interesting idea dragons were never mentioned in black clover. elves, dwarves, demons, spirits, but never dragons. then imagine a book of (6 clovers) made with dragon scales. This book will give (Mc from Black Clover) the characteristics of a dragon. So the author can take a look at the magic of Dragon Slayer (Fairy Tail). Of course, it doesn't have to be fire. why would it be a disappointment. being able to be a magician who leads the elves and demons. since dragons would be a feather of strength in the world of black clover.

Well, analyzing a power level with a system user is complex. but analyzing the (MC) carefully. so far and divided by 3 cores. (based on the power level of the shinobi world), with kizaru, 2 types of advanced haki, an absurd fruit, she is at kage level without a doubt. But the kenpashi model, since it is not in its Shinigami form, will not be able to use its true potential. Remembering that kenpashi never used spiritual or battle techniques, just raw power. (kenpashi before being sealed could be equated to a captain). he is probably at the (anbu) level. while his original kenki genkai from the Uzumaki clan. It uses multiple affinities. are quite impressive. but, to put it in an isolated case, he is nothing more than an elite jonin. well so far. rine Sharingan. with this super kage level. no doubt. from now on. nothing below super kagr level can stop him

I know this idea seems stupid. But imagine Kiyotaka's biological mother showing up. well normally it would be impossible. but with the system that changes reality nothing is impossible. It would be comical, even moving, to see this scene. Of course unlikely.

And in the next episode of Dragon Ball Z, Suzene takes the lead.

Author-dono. Ayanakoji-kun. Harém. Banzai, banzai, banzai banzai

black clover would be simpler, and I was curious to know which new book (MC) would win. and also without it the black book of anti-magic would be free. and it would have a wonderful harem, one piece already has a lot of fic, if the author-san focuses on it, I would start with black clover and would leave between 60 and 70 chapters or even 3 seasons. Then I would start one piece. Of course it won't happen :(

Honestly, what a terrible story. boring characters, a protagonist who is a generic villain from ntr.ha he was bullied, that's why he went crazy, what a shitty excuse to make (mc) boring. make a girl be abused by 4 guys and seriously. Half-assed writing, a system without any sense. This story is just a fetish of this sick author

Kill lá kill

Harém please

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Yanderer life banzai...banzai

Someone tell me I'm misunderstanding but I smell harem. jean and alex. I misunderstood, please give me the answer