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Fighter_X1012yrCommentedCh 2 Problem in the school- Fighter_X1012yrCommented
loll seems like Dylan is a funny character
fake cry "I knew it mom you guys are partial with Jess always so I doubted if I was picked up from trash can it turned out true you yourself said that we are not siblings" Dylan said still continuing his act of crying - Fighter_X1012yrCommented
Nice describing of the features...
Its after sunset and I am working on my new project and I am very excited about it. I thought of taking a small break so went toward the large window in my office and started at the city. it was busy as usual and beautiful also the view I had form my office was very magnificent one can keep watching it without getting bored. I turned to the table and saw herself in the mirror long Hazelnut brown hair, Crystal blue eyes that could capture anyone's heart. Long legs and slim body many people have said to her that I don't need a model for the dresses I designs and that I myself is very beautiful and can do modelling. I never took their words seriously but I knew that she was pretty but today after working for so long you can see tiredness in those crystal blue eyes. Then I saw that dad was calling me "Hi Dad" I said - Fighter_X1012yrPosted
Hii Dear author Starting with the title it captured my attention immediately. it was a unique title and had a mystery to it . reading the title itself i decided to check out the story. but before the cover of the book is exquisite even if the quality is not good i can see u put your effort in making it. the synopsis was short and crisp and only revealed the parts that needed to be and did not give any spoilers. i personally hate spoilers so i was happy that the author didn't give any. The introduction of the characters were beautifully done and the describing of the characters made it better to imagine the character. there are a few gramatical errors but its fine everyone makes mistakes but make sure to correct them next time. The story line is really awesome and i am hoping to see the next chapters soon. So please author upload them soon i can't keep my curiosity to myself.