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Not again đ After everything he had done for her now. Seems like she loves to roll herself in self pity instead of actually accepting Reeces apologies.
Tidas' like:
Well he should be hearing that thought of hers too? đ
Why does she feel bad about having said these things about her father? She didn't even know that he was talking about being a wolf? Her father should be the one feeling bad for not mentioning this little wolf detail the whole time.
What?! This whole conversation between Raina and Jessica is so weird and confusing! I just don't understand it at all. Why does Raina say "Drama" out of nothing and why does Jessica feel so offended by "drama drama" ? So weird?
I genuinely don't understand her outburst here. The whole conversation is super confusing - I thought no one even talked to Jessica before so that's why I don't get her anger right now.
Did I miss something here? Who are these guys? Xander and Jay? I find all their chapters very uninteresting and I have the feeling I know nothing about them or their importance to the story. I really liked the start of the book very much but I'm at a point now where I am not very keen on continuing. đ
Elia is like:
Why is Malia still only a head voice when they're in their wolf's form? I don't understand Malias part in the story anymore.. She should then at least be the one controlling the wolf's body so that Alia is only the voice in the head. It should be written out of Malias perspective whenever the wolf is doing anything and she is the one leading the body. It's hard to build a connection to Malia at the moment. For me personally she is just this annoying head voice with no features and no purpose really. If she would be necessary to control the wolf, it would at least give a reason for her to be there.
I'm very glad about this scene! Up to this point I was very annoyed with Malia and didn't see the point of her character being a good addition to the story. I was missing her being more of a wolf-like voice instead of a quirky flirty girl in Alias head. I like that she can loose control over Malia and hope you'll go more into this direction with her as a character. đ
Huuhh?! Haven't they already met and talked and everything? The Alpha Damon and Alia? Am I not getting something here? đđđ