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NeverLoved2462yrPostedI came to this app specifically to read this book and its by far the most fantastic novel I've found on here. It's written beautifully and in a way that leaves no way for misunderstanding. The story flows smoothly and in the parts where it slows it seems to be intentional or at least meshes well with the rest of the story The character design is unique in that the way characters personality seems to piece well with their abilities. It misses the usual pitfalls that separate a personality from what they can do and instead each character is a seamless bundle. I can't really speak to the updating stability as I devour chapters faster than any person could possible write them so it's never enough for me. I blasted through all 900+ chapters in one sitting that lasted for 40+hours. I had dreams about being an ant for weeks. The world is well flushed out and despite the length of the series its still refreshing and exciting to piece together new pieces of the puzzle that is the world. Most importantly unlike other novels that are shameless and want you to pay over $300 while only offering you the slightest of starts this masterpiece is entirely free and beautiful.
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ppft
'Then, when I am old enough, I would be forced to work with my relatives, get married, and have children. Option two, wait until I am tall enough to grab sharp objects, put an end to my misery, and take another spin at reincarnation, hoping for a better outcome. I think I'll go with option number two.' - NeverLoved2462yrCommented
yknow being unconscious is actually like super bad for you
However, it looked like Anna could not take the grief she had. She lost consciousness. - NeverLoved2462yrCommented
Super hugs. Epic
"Uhm… Gege, you see... I feel really comfortable when you hug me. My body feels light and relaxed. Gale should have felt the same. She easily falls asleep while hugging you. I also feel the same." - NeverLoved2462yrCommentedCh 509 An Elf
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Aw man those authors always forget the UB tag.
Finally, after what felt like an eternity, the door opened as a man accompanied by a PA walked in. He had a fat, bulging stomach. The hair on his head had already surrendered to fate, leaving only a couple of shrub-like existences on the side. Sporting a bulbous nose, a thick pair of lips, and slanted eyes, the man wasn't much of a looker. - NeverLoved2462yrCommented
This is painful. Every other paragraph is been not just been butchered but completely slaughtered. It's jarring and sad.
There are Thousands of Refinement Engine Blueprints on the From A to D grade for free on the web, the most difficult problem is constructing them inside our Heart. - NeverLoved2462yrCommented
Too much cringe
Jay on the other hand had also fallen into the same situation as Sarah, momentarily mesmerized by Sarah's bright blue eyes that were like beautiful pristine lakes. - NeverLoved2462yrCommented
Hate.
Suddenly, both began laughing about this situation, until slowly calming down and remaining silent, Jay dropped his head back on the ground while Sarah layed hers on Jay's chest, both enjoying the breeze in the backyard. - NeverLoved2462yrCommented
ugh
Sarah on the other hand was on top of him, with her chin resting on his chest and a sports top that exposed her abdomen and lower back, as well as some black leggings that accentuated her curves. - NeverLoved2462yrCommented
Awwwww yeah. ilitteration is the true diety
"Doesn't that mean we need a new leader?" Loask said while rubbing his scaly chin. The prospect of Loask the leader didn't sound bad. Loask and Leader both even started with L, that had to mean something good for sure. - NeverLoved2462yrCommented
The only the grimmest of slime girls will do
Ed wanted to take things to the next step now. He would take his exploits from the age of slime straight into the age of humanoid underlings! He wanted to make an unnamed humanoid species. - NeverLoved2462yrCommented
This is just cheating...
< Opponent has been defeated 25 exp has been earned > - NeverLoved2462yrCommented
wut.. why?
"Have you forgotten about me that quickly already?," Vorden said, "You're mine and I'm not letting anyone hurt you." - NeverLoved2462yrCommented
It feels a little cheap to just describe it a "futuristic" and "impressive technology" why are they impressed? What does it look like? Paint a picture with your words don't make the reader do all the work.
The green plain was not the only thing the students saw. There were three futuristic, huge buildings directly in front of them. The buildings were human images sculpted entirely out of glass. Each one stood at least sixty feet tall, but that was not the only thing that the field overlooked. They were standing on an elevated platform with a city in front of them, a hidden city. Everyone was already dressed up in a military uniform and there were technological marvels appealing to them all. - NeverLoved2462yrCommented
The cover said Emma Paul on it. That's my name!!!!
Chapter 2 : A New World