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Pluto28

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2022-02-17 JoinedGlobal
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  • Pluto28
    Pluto282mth
    Commented

    how about a familiar of zero? instead of louise familiar he will be tiffania?

    I have been thinking about writing a new fanfiction, but then again, I just want to ask: If I write something, what do you want me to write?
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    My Stepsister in Kyoto
    Anime & Comics · akikan40
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  • Pluto28
    Pluto282mth
    Commented

    SIMP alert!

    Ch 5 Riveria Ljos Alf
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    Shining God in Danmachi
    Anime & Comics · Cozmooo
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  • Pluto28
    Pluto285mth
    Posted

    I hope this one does not end the same for the other story featuring star wars because it was very deisappointing despite having good idea. I hope that the MC in this one will have a character development and. I hope for this one to live to its potential but so far the story is good. Hope not to be a disappointment like the other one.

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    Krypton Reborn: Dragon of the Sun
    Anime & Comics · VendakSoth
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  • Pluto28
    Pluto285mth
    Posted

    The protagonists are very childish like they don't grow up, it is very good in terms of updating but the story is disappointing. I've skipped a lot of chapters hoping to see the protagonist grow up but I'm fed up of the story. It is very disappointing, I thought they will grow up but instead it got worse. They can't even have a solid decision and pretty much acts like a child. It has potential at first but it was limited by the writer.

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    Krypton Reborn: A Star Wars Story
    Anime & Comics · VendakSoth
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  • Pluto28
    Pluto285mth
    Commented

    1

    2. Familiar of Zero x Warhammer
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    GATE: Thus The Imperium of Man Fought There
    Anime & Comics · Ray_Vorhard_2199
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  • Pluto28
    Pluto285mth
    Posted

    just a copy an paste of star wars, there is no development

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    Star Wars: Rise of the forgotten clan
    Movies · Vapidbread829
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  • Pluto28
    Pluto285mth
    Replied to _Slayer_13_

    cause he's a wuss

    A helpless smile appeared on Yami's face, and after a little thought, he said, "Give me some time to think about it, and when the Captain and I return to Orario, I will ask Hephaestus-sama to invite Loki-sama to clear up today's misunderstanding, and I will give you an answer at that time!"
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    Danmachi: I have a Simulator!
    Anime & Comics · Novelette_Seeker
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  • Pluto28
    Pluto286mth
    Posted

    it's not a good fanfic, the story goes nowhere

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    I Reap Souls In DC (Bleach X DC comics)
    Anime & Comics · Saintbarbido
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  • Pluto28
    Pluto286mth
    Commented

    do you really need to emphasize? it does not make sense

    "He is Ryan. Have you read the profile of a new foreign student from Indonesia?"
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    The Laziest System: Sign-Up System
    Anime & Comics · Ryusenka
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  • Pluto28
    Pluto286mth
    Posted

    not to be rude but if i may ask. is this a translation?

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    Daily Life Of The Grand Lord
    Others · Sky_Piecer
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  • Pluto28
    Pluto286mth
    Commented

    shower author with power stones!

    Ch 31 I'm a man of my word
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    Hades in the Multiverse
    Anime & Comics · Cedric_7512
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  • Pluto28
    Pluto287mth
    Posted

    i'm quite disappointed on how this goes, it has a potential but was ruined

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    Marvel: The Death Surgeon
    Movies · Charizard6
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  • Pluto28
    Pluto281yr
    Posted

    i was laughing while reading it. thanks for the chapters, keep up the updates

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    I hate Chinese novel
    Anime & Comics · TonyStank
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  • Pluto28
    Pluto281yr
    Commented

    thank you for you wonderful story, see you next time

    Ch 171 Notice—Last
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    Conquering The Omni-Verse!
    TV · KingSeyer
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  • Pluto28
    Pluto281yr
    Posted

    mc is stupid in every decision he makes. story development is bad and events pop out kike mushroom, stopped reading it when he tells to jean he was reborn with his powers

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    In Marvel as Superman
    Anime & Comics · DarkHelixDragoon24
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  • Pluto28
    Pluto281yr
    Commented

    +1

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  • Pluto28
    Pluto281yr
    Commented

    +1

    Ulquiorra Cifer (Resurrección, Dark Cero, Luz de la Luna, Segunda Etapa: Lanza del Relámpago)
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    DanMachi: in Freya Familia with Bleach System
    Anime & Comics · magnet_release
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  • Pluto28
    Pluto281yr
    Commented

    +1

    Ulquiorra Cifer (Resurrección, Dark Cero, Luz de la Luna, Segunda Etapa: Lanza del Relámpago)
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    DanMachi: in Freya Familia with Bleach System
    Anime & Comics · magnet_release
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  • Pluto28
    Pluto281yr
    Commented

    why do he even care?

    'This should help them open their eyes a little, their egos have been raised to the extreme by their parents. It will be hard to bring them back to normal but I hope it doesn't go as I think it would.' Yuuya didn't say anything further and walked out of the office slowly.
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    DIDN'T ASK FOR THIS.
    Anime & Comics · OVERLOAD69
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  • Pluto28
    Pluto281yr
    Commented

    i am quite disappointed on the mc, i mean he can kust swat them away like flies and the attitude of his fsmily to him, so why would he care for them?

    Ch 54 Twins
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    DIDN'T ASK FOR THIS.
    Anime & Comics · OVERLOAD69
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