I loved the world/characters. It felt very fantastical and magical. The names of the characters were also just cool to me. I feel as if the word choice could have been better in some places, but aside from that I was deeply enjoying this story.

A little selfish of me to write my own review, but I just wanted to take a moment to say thank you for everyone who's read this story and I hope more people read my story. I'm relatively new to the writing game so it makes me happy to know that people have read my story at all. Thanks for the support and I assure you this won't be the last time I post on this website.