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  • DaoistDlL6M5
    DaoistDlL6M51yr
    Replied to MDOM5_Assessoria

    There will not be much description. Not many dialogues. It would be just the skeleton of the story without meat. Well, that's my plan at least.

    Ch 75 Interrogation
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    Replied to bndr

    thank you

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  • DaoistDlL6M5
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    Replied to BreezyNovels

    Ye Ziyun, Xiao Ning'er, Yang Xin (possibly), Ying Yueru, Yu Yan(possibly). As for commenting under the review of fantasyheart, if I want to add to my review I don't want it to be far below other comments.

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  • DaoistDlL6M5
    DaoistDlL6M51yr
    Replied to Slushy_Apollo

    I would be grateful if you point them out in paragraph comments.

    Ch 73 Fathers' council
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  • DaoistDlL6M5
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    Replied to Zaitro

    Clauses are created mentally. Agreeing to the contract, following orders, and keeping secrets means what Nie Li considers them to be, not what Ming Yahui thought it would be about.

    "The third step: Confidentiality clause. You cannot share my secrets in any form and shape. If you try to do that you will die?" Ming Yahui struggled with this condition most. Because even the thought of betraying Nie Li caused pain. It was an almost foolproof contract. After Ming Yahui agreed to the final condition, Nie Li let go of his imprisoning technique releasing him.
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  • DaoistDlL6M5
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    Replied to HHKing

    I thank that wasn't in the novel.

    Her mood ruined she decided to return home as well.
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  • DaoistDlL6M5
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    Replied to Togglingon

    It's canon. She really carried three new soul crystals with her.

    "Wait, is that soul crystal? I have my own here" said Xiao Ning'er and took out three soul crystals from her ring.
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  • DaoistDlL6M5
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    Replied to DaoistojZfIq

    Not really even the Myriads Rivers and Mountains Painting is said to be stretched tens of thousands of miles in every direction. Even if it was a flat world and with a radius of 10000 miles that would be half the Earth's size. But it is said tens of thousands, not ten thousand. And the tiny world isn't a pocket world. It's a real world even if artificially created.

    But Nie Li didn't care. Because humans were rare creatures in this world and there are maybe billions or maybe even trillions of Demon Horned Sheep outside. Even if they will hunt down all of the demon Horned Sheep inside the hunting grounds Principal would just bring more from outside.
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  • DaoistDlL6M5
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    Replied to Ray75_

    Do you think she knows who he is? For her, he is just an unknown kid in cheap clothes.

    This process continued till the end of the lesson and Nie Li continued sleeping. Even though Shen Xiu noticed the sleeping student in the back row and was angry, she was arrogant enough to dismiss him. If some commoner wants to waste his time and money in the academy sleeping instead of learning it's their choice. They wouldn't amount to much anyway. Lu Piao also tried to wake up Nei Li discreetly but gave up after some tries.
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  • DaoistDlL6M5
    DaoistDlL6M51yr
    Replied to Mental

    No. Events will be changed too much by then. And please leave your comments under the review of TypeFantasyHeart.

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  • DaoistDlL6M5
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    Replied to asaade

    It's a shame to lose such a long time reader. I remember your comments from early chapters. Can you explain to me what chapters really annoyed you? I am not going to rewrite them, just will take them into consideration if I decide to write another fic.

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  • DaoistDlL6M5
    DaoistDlL6M51yr
    Replied to daoistosrio546

    No. I think money would be a bit different. They are called 'demon spirit coins'. It must be somehow related to demon spirits. And demon spirits cannot be replicated. There could be other protections as well. Even if Nie Li could find a workaround to that money forgery, isn't a good idea in your own city.

    Ch 71 Family treasury
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    Replied to DraconicEmperor

    thank you

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    Replied to bndr

    thank you

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    Replied to Monalishingun

    thank you

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  • DaoistDlL6M5
    DaoistDlL6M51yr
    Replied to Daoist7h0MsQ

    Yes

    Ch 70 Am I too careful?
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  • DaoistDlL6M5
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    Replied to Simone007

    Thank you for helping to find the plot hole. Sometimes author considers something and writes a story forgetting that his audience doesn't know the background of the event. Me being an inexperienced author exacerbates the situation. I have added a couple of paragraphs to fill the hole somewhat.

    Ch 2 Am I reckless?
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  • DaoistDlL6M5
    DaoistDlL6M51yr
    Replied to Juhiko

    Shen Xiu will not join the harem. You don't have to argue with everyone who mentions her.

    Ch 69 Visit ended
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  • DaoistDlL6M5
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    Replied to Fahad501

    Yeah. I noticed that my writing style is quite unusual for fanfics. But it's literally the first story I am writing. It's an experiment for me as well.

    Ch 69 Visit ended
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  • DaoistDlL6M5
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    Replied to LOF

    He can. There's no heavenly energy in the Tiny world so no one can cultivate it. Other worlds don't have this limitation.

    Nie Li assured them that he was watching everything from a safe distance. And what a sight it was! The lightning flashes were happening constantly. Nie Li had charged the inscription patterns with a huge amount of energy from Heavenly Energy Crystal, and it could also absorb part of the energy released by the dying ghosts, so it's going to last for some time.
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