Actually our glorious bin chickens.
Haha not that odd. More and more common when people of all backgrounds mingle.
Story flows nicely with the touch of the godly pantheons for the first six chapters and it is immersive. Follow Xaloc on his journey, for now it is the start!
The initial chapter is very descriptive about e-sports and the world. While I can see the story development clearly, the author might want to consider a more ‘active’ inclusion of the characters into her description which will boost interest.
Jomon period. The earliest known civilisations in Japan goes back there.
Story flows nicely. Supernatural plot is good. Echo is a dynamic character. So let’s see what happens to Damon! To the author, Keep up the good work!
Interesting concept of using an espionage background. The plot is developing as it goes. The author doing a good job of making the story flow. Keep up the good work.
The story of Troan is immersive and the pace is great. These type of novels are hard to write but the author has went beyond expectations and kept every twist and turn connected with the pace. Do keep up the good work!
Ah. It’s spelled that way on purpose. Only much later, the reader will find out why the figure speaks with a prolonged fricative emphasis on ‘s’ sounds.