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Passingsands

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  • Passingsands
    Passingsands4mth
    Replied to TheTotallySaneGuy

    Actually our glorious bin chickens.

    "Not white exactly. They have a few blackish feathers," Arahabaki's eyes gazed up as he continued, "Oh and black bald heads with those very nice curved beaks."
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    FU Tales
    Fantasy · Passingsands
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  • Passingsands
    Passingsands4mth
    Replied to TheTotallySaneGuy

    Haha not that odd. More and more common when people of all backgrounds mingle.

    However, Alex had one thing going for him - a mixed European and Asian descent in their postgraduate class. Alex's unusual but good-looking facial features could pass him off as half Japanese, even though he is half-Chinese.
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    FU Tales
    Fantasy · Passingsands
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  • Passingsands
    Passingsands4mth
    Posted

    Story flows nicely with the touch of the godly pantheons for the first six chapters and it is immersive. Follow Xaloc on his journey, for now it is the start!

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    Atlantis: The Twilight of the gods [BL]
    LGBT+ · Dark_Scholars
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  • Passingsands
    Passingsands4mth
    Posted

    The initial chapter is very descriptive about e-sports and the world. While I can see the story development clearly, the author might want to consider a more ‘active’ inclusion of the characters into her description which will boost interest.

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    Cosmic: Empyrean's Quest
    Video Games · empressblackrose09
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  • Passingsands
    Passingsands4mth
    Replied to empressblackrose09

    Jomon period. The earliest known civilisations in Japan goes back there.

    [Yamatai Territory, Wa country. Primitive Human Era 3000 BCE]
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    FU Tales
    Fantasy · Passingsands
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  • Passingsands
    Passingsands5mth
    Posted

    Story flows nicely. Supernatural plot is good. Echo is a dynamic character. So let’s see what happens to Damon! To the author, Keep up the good work!

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    Rebirth: Forbidden Love With A Demon
    Fantasy Romance · Frost_Reaper_1820
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  • Passingsands
    Passingsands5mth
    Posted

    Interesting concept of using an espionage background. The plot is developing as it goes. The author doing a good job of making the story flow. Keep up the good work.

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    The Wild Hunt System
    Fantasy · IndianSage
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  • Passingsands
    Passingsands5mth
    Posted

    The story of Troan is immersive and the pace is great. These type of novels are hard to write but the author has went beyond expectations and kept every twist and turn connected with the pace. Do keep up the good work!

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    Primordial Versatile Grandmaster
    Fantasy · Mel_Aniv
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  • Passingsands
    Passingsands5mth
    Replied to DMC_MAX

    Ah. It’s spelled that way on purpose. Only much later, the reader will find out why the figure speaks with a prolonged fricative emphasis on ‘s’ sounds.

    "But live, healthy animalsss are fine," the hooded figure quipped.
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    FU Tales
    Fantasy · Passingsands
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