what can I say other then it has massive potential, everything so far is great but slightly unpolished. but I certainly believe the author can live up to the level he has shown

thank you for reading and I hope you continue to enjoy it going forword

(only read the first 15 chapters) overall its pretty well written with only a few grammatical errors, but I couldn't quite follow the path of events in the first few chapters

you have more then earned it with your work and inspiring my to start my writing journey I'm only sad that I couldn't give a bigger gift

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

hello everyone why here to anyone looking to read this novel(in its current state) please try chapter 2 yes chapter 1 is a mess that I would like to hide under my stairs but I'm not at the level required to fix it yet I can promise it gets so much better in chapter 2 and beyond thank you for taking the time to read this and my novel