Although, that still brings up the question of why Jamie took Veronica. What if all of that was an elaborate plan by Jesse, Jaime, and Veronica. Or Jesse, Jaime, and the Howards.

If Lauren is telling the truth did Jesse set her up?

I knew Lauren couldn't be as good as she acted.

I'm confused why Victoria would stay with Jamie. It would seem that she never cared for Jordan at all and left him thinking she was dead.

Where do you find free passes?

Where do you find the free passes?

Author, I'm trying to keep giving this story a chance but I need to know if Victoria is coming back or not. Please reply with a yes or no. I'm not asking you to divulge the story. I just want a yes or no.

Author, Is Victoria coming back in this novel or not?

Okay, so he is going to marry Lauren because he assumes the Howard's took Victoria. but he is not in love with Lauren. I'm getting lost. What happened to Victoria and will she show up to mangle this wedding like Jordan did hers?

Did you see my comment about contacting through email?

I think Victoria was making a sacrifice rather than creating a deception. Lauren doesn't know him well and has the equivalent of a schoolgirl infatuation with him. I know ow what it is too fall for the wrong person to as I have been cheated on many times but I have seen many things from Victoria that makes me believe in her. She was incredibly miserable when she had to end it and wouldn't allow Russell to so much as touch her.

Sandra, I cannot message you directly. If you send me an email I will be happy to help.

Sandra, It won't allow me to message you. I'll give you my email and we can talk there if you like

Also, if Victoria had not hidden that she risked seeing him grow to hate her, which she feared a great deal.

Simple, Victoria stood by Jordan through thick and thin. I believe that Jordan and Lauren should be co-parents but I think you're being to hard on Victoria. She was convinced by Russell that Jordan's father had murdered her father. It was her father, the man she loved the most as a child and family honor would compel her to get revenge. She couldn't stand to see Jordan grow to hate her and instead pushed to have him forget her and marry someone, anyone because no matter who it was she wouldn't love them. Her full character arc makes her the best woman for Jordan. Lauren is nice but they really aren't that compatible and if they ended up together it would be a loveless marriage. Again, I think Jordan should marry Victoria and Co-Parent with Lauren.

There are 25 other completed chapters but since this went to premium we have to wait. that's not cool considering I've spent more on this book that I did to own the Dragonlance saga.

If you would like a co-writer to help with this story, you can contact me and I will help. That's how much I like this story.

I think Victoria has proven herself throughout the book to be the best one for him. When she went to Houston and Russell played his mind games and convinced her that Rowan Steele killed her father and ruined her life. She wanted to avenge that but she didn't want to see the way Jordan would hate and despise her for that and she would have also known that her and whoever her husband was would likely be killed by the Steele's if she succeeded so Russell wasn't a big loss to her.

I kind of like Jordan with Victoria. She was manipulated by Russell who claimed to have the proof of it happening.

Really hoping for a good ending with JordN and Victoria