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Dear writer, I would highly recommend taking some time to read through all of the comments on your story. By doing so, you may gain some valuable insights and feedback that could help you further improve your work. Additionally, I suggest revisiting your story once again after reading the comments, as it may help you appreciate how good your story truly is.
Can I ask if MC lives on Earth or in an immortal world? He should at least have some social awareness of how, where, and with whom to talk in the mortal world.