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So a self help guru like fellow, turned genocidal criminal worse than the funny mustache man learns how, and follows through with getting to another world. There he uses his knowledge of human behavior to become??? I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes. Excellent story so far my friend!
Probably the funniest thing I've seen all day.
You can't end the chapter there! I need to know what happens next! Excellent descriptions throughout the chapter. Honestly your ability to paint the scene is one of the best I've read! I really enjoy your stories, and wish I had more time to read them!
Dude, I know I say this a lot, but your descriptions are top tier. Take your time planning things. I'll gladly wait for it if it means continued high-quality stories. Excellent chapter. The new characters seem really interesting. Thank you for the upload!
Wait, wait, wait, are you telling me that we might not be able to trust a devil named Heartless? You're blowing my mind, lol. It was very smart to switch to a different character for the uneventful travel, and then back the next chapter. You're story flow is top quality and you definitely deserve more readers!
Well, that went from 0 to 100 quick, lol. Smart writing with the scales becoming a part of the body when brought into the body. I didn't consider it, and it makes sense to me for it to be used like an armor. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!