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David_Jordan_2345

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2022-02-04 JoinedGlobal
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  • David_Jordan_2345
    David_Jordan_234510mth
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    Excellent atmosphere!

    Ch 6 Treasures!
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    Master of Deception
    Fantasy · Bamboo_Vine
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  • David_Jordan_2345
    David_Jordan_234510mth
    Commented

    So our hero is a short king. lol

    Ch 5 Basement filled with treasures?
    altalt
    Master of Deception
    Fantasy · Bamboo_Vine
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  • David_Jordan_2345
    David_Jordan_234510mth
    Commented

    What a wise teacher. Definitely knowledgeable on people, and capable of learning from witnessing others. Very well written!

    Ch 4 Wine Everhart
    altalt
    Master of Deception
    Fantasy · Bamboo_Vine
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  • David_Jordan_2345
    David_Jordan_234510mth
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    So a self help guru like fellow, turned genocidal criminal worse than the funny mustache man learns how, and follows through with getting to another world. There he uses his knowledge of human behavior to become??? I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes. Excellent story so far my friend!

    Ch 3 Plans!
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    Master of Deception
    Fantasy · Bamboo_Vine
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  • David_Jordan_2345
    David_Jordan_234510mth
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    Excellent atmosphere and writing!

    Ch 1 Alexander Winslow [Prologue]
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    Master of Deception
    Fantasy · Bamboo_Vine
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  • David_Jordan_2345
    David_Jordan_234510mth
    Commented

    Probably the funniest thing I've seen all day.

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    altalt
    Master of Deception
    Fantasy · Bamboo_Vine
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  • David_Jordan_2345
    David_Jordan_234510mth
    Commented

    Great chapter. Excellent depiction of the city, and its boundaries. The city acting like a trap is cool. I can't wait for the next chapter.

    Ch 44 Distopian Lands And A Locked Bird
    altalt
    Lord of Identities
    Fantasy · FamishedGod
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  • David_Jordan_2345
    David_Jordan_234510mth
    Commented

    Hey man, great chapter. I'm enjoying it as always. It's interesting to me that the Heavens give his slaves power, but to the Heavens, I'm sure it would be less than an ant. Anyway great chapter as always!

    Ch 43 Not heartless, But Mindless.
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    Lord of Identities
    Fantasy · FamishedGod
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  • David_Jordan_2345
    David_Jordan_234510mth
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    I'm loving the way you show us the history of characters. excellent chapter. thank you very much!

    Ch 42 Bondage
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    Lord of Identities
    Fantasy · FamishedGod
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  • David_Jordan_2345
    David_Jordan_234510mth
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    See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

    Ch 42 Bondage
    altalt
    Lord of Identities
    Fantasy · FamishedGod
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  • David_Jordan_2345
    David_Jordan_234510mth
    Commented

    You're a bit excited. I'm super excited. This is a ton of fun to read. I'll probably go through the story again soon. You definitely have a talent. I can't wait for others to see you shine!

    Ch 41 Heaven's Warrior
    altalt
    Lord of Identities
    Fantasy · FamishedGod
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  • David_Jordan_2345
    David_Jordan_234511mth
    Commented

    Wow What an amazing chapter! If I had to guess then our horse friend may have gotten his name from the Heavens sealing his individuality away? Excellent chapter. your descriptions as always are top notch, and it's always really enjoyable!

    Ch 40 The Boy and Horse
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    Lord of Identities
    Fantasy · FamishedGod
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  • David_Jordan_2345
    David_Jordan_234511mth
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    You can't end the chapter there! I need to know what happens next! Excellent descriptions throughout the chapter. Honestly your ability to paint the scene is one of the best I've read! I really enjoy your stories, and wish I had more time to read them!

    Ch 38 The Moving Tornado
    altalt
    Lord of Identities
    Fantasy · FamishedGod
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  • David_Jordan_2345
    David_Jordan_234511mth
    Commented

    Dude, I know I say this a lot, but your descriptions are top tier. Take your time planning things. I'll gladly wait for it if it means continued high-quality stories. Excellent chapter. The new characters seem really interesting. Thank you for the upload!

    Ch 37 Horselife
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    Lord of Identities
    Fantasy · FamishedGod
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  • David_Jordan_2345
    David_Jordan_234511mth
    Commented

    Wow great chapter. So our hero can relive others lives? That seems so insane! Thanks for the chapter I can't wait for the next one!

    Ch 36 He had become the...What?!
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    Lord of Identities
    Fantasy · FamishedGod
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  • David_Jordan_2345
    David_Jordan_234511mth
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

    Ch 36 He had become the...What?!
    altalt
    Lord of Identities
    Fantasy · FamishedGod
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  • David_Jordan_2345
    David_Jordan_234511mth
    Commented

    What a chapter! I had a feeling the human sovereign was related to their ridiculous luck. If he can devour a rank 5 like that, even if it isn't real, then is his luck perhaps higher than rank 5? Excellent chapter. I can't wait for the next one!

    Ch 35 Luck stealing!
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    Lord of Identities
    Fantasy · FamishedGod
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  • David_Jordan_2345
    David_Jordan_234511mth
    Commented

    Wait, wait, wait, are you telling me that we might not be able to trust a devil named Heartless? You're blowing my mind, lol. It was very smart to switch to a different character for the uneventful travel, and then back the next chapter. You're story flow is top quality and you definitely deserve more readers!

    Ch 34 The Citadel Of Dreams
    altalt
    Lord of Identities
    Fantasy · FamishedGod
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  • David_Jordan_2345
    David_Jordan_234511mth
    Commented

    Well, that went from 0 to 100 quick, lol. Smart writing with the scales becoming a part of the body when brought into the body. I didn't consider it, and it makes sense to me for it to be used like an armor. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

    Ch 33 Dragonic Training
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    Lord of Identities
    Fantasy · FamishedGod
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  • David_Jordan_2345
    David_Jordan_234511mth
    Commented

    I didn't see that coming. Excellent chapter! I hope we learn why people will be trying to kill our character soon enough and learn more about our new horse companion. Thank you for the upload.

    Ch 31 Change
    altalt
    Lord of Identities
    Fantasy · FamishedGod
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