Glad someone started translating this I read a portion of the original but my Russian isn't great and Google translate is horrendous, looking forwards to updates, last translator dropped at Ch 16.

MC, younger wealthy and disobedient, she called him puppy for a reason

Oh yikes those two are about to get merked. And if it's not by Horizon its gonna be a certain Law Matani visiting with some friends in suits.

Honestly disappointed but will see where this goes.

Could have just written random stuff in Russian it's pretty much what True Creator does

Considering what happened to those guys at the restaurant I think he knows more than he let's on, he is to paranoid for that

Finally, most TK fics I've seen always go for massive force pushes or shows of weight control to represent power increase. TK could be so much more useful with precision imo, just turn a vertebrae into dust or force induce an aneurysm. Would take much less effort.

Honestly, it's quite good. The merger between your original creation and DxD is done quite organically, and the AU approach you have taken for devil society and general development is a breath of fresh air. Only comment I have is about the moment between Grayfia and Sirzechs, Richter in my taste reacted to softly, losing like 5, 10 affection and reconciling after 2 Ch in a situation that should have affected him alot more considering the past issues you have given him as well as the promises Grayfia made. Although the talk you did with her mother was great for Grayfias character development and self reflection, it shouldn't have been the catalyst to him forgiving her, Introspection isn't an excuse for actions that affect others. I guess we will see what you do with the second meeting. Altogether , fic I'm looking forward to seeing updates from you. Keep up the good work.

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Loved ur approach on relationships, especially in silverfire, compared to the usually lemon focused content u find on here u always manage to make those soft scenes that make me feel all mushy

Great as always, however I have channeled voodoo curses on u for skipping the lemon and not even giving abit of lime juice. Prepare for headaches and daily mild inconveniences.

Law already showed quite a preference in the club to mutant quirks cause they're more interesting, I wonder if he's ever tasted rabbit ...

3/5 (Dropped at Ch 35) Obvious issues with grammar but author mentioned that and made a clear effort so it's fine, great start and potential based on Devil Fruit selection and future possibilities due to that. To much reliance on system for the story, lots of info dumping on system functions and grants to many boons. Systems are great for fics but putting everything on a silver platter can affect the story progression and the growth of your character, same as having to many functions ex. the crew cards. Lastly, and reason for dropping, presence of other reincarnator (Rindou food wars) as well as Multiverse items (Pokeball), the Black Pearl worked due to its functionality in the world environment but anything else is abit to much. Overall it is a decent fic, if you have no issues with what I mentioned I recommend you give it a try.

Just count the years spent in the void or something and it's all gucci

Ngl Tatsu is abit to pushy, she was saved by him when he didn't need to, he taught her about the supernatural when he didn't need to, gave her power when he didn't need to, even gave her an opportunity to train when he didn't need to and somehow she still acts like that. Hope she gets a reality check later on.

On the forehead?? Well at least we got our daily dose of Neji violence this chapter and the one were he basically destroyed the MHA world are my two favorites I think, it shows even though he tries to keep a human side his ascension to an unfeeling god is possible at any moment, love it.

Quick question, is his OP knowledge continual, like it follows ur own, in which he knows about the lunarian/warlord kids, IMU, Nika and all that stuff or does it stop at a specific arc? Great chapter loved the teaching approach and the exposition was done well.

I really like this chapter, I enjoy his pride and arrogance but him doing it every chapter pushes it abit on the edgy side, having a chapter like this where he is more chill and interacts with them and makes it clear that the only reason he is rude towards them is because he holds them to a certain standard is cool. Also free my girl Jirou my man just bought her close and left her hanging at the last moment 😭 at least let her finish smh

Interesting story and looking forward to seeing where you go with this, keep up the good work. Just a few points I wanted to address though: - The calling out his abilities before using them, but you already fixed that based on someone else's comment which is nice to see. - The movements before his actions, is that like a personal tic of his or something , because you mentioned specifically that he has psychokinesis and not telekinesis, the movements would make sense for telekinesis since he would be initiating or guiding the energy, but with psycho he is just using his brain, especially with parallel processing. - This one doesn't really matter, you have him do cardio with 2tons and then he is out of breath after 1 round in bed. - Lastly, and the main one, the way he uses his powers, you did mention he isn't in his prime so that would explain why he is more at a raw force stage than control stage, because with the 70-100 ton range you've given him dealing with homelander should take little to no effort but he kinda just pulls a Naruto by pushing and pulling instead of focalising his attacks. Ok rant thingy over, don't think I'm criticising btw I really like this fic just trying to point out a few things to see where author is trying to lead this into.