The colors were beautiful! The story was wonderful. I wish there was more on some of the characters. Also, the ending, even though it was beautiful, seemed lacking in story development compared to the of the beginning.

The story was over all good, but it left a few things unfinished or unexplained in my opinion. It would build a character up and then drop them. Most everything tied together at the end, but left a few things unclear.

The chapters are too short. Constantly moving to the next chapter after two seconds of reading makes it hard for the story to flow. It also makes the price for the chapters not seem worth it. The art is beautiful. I love the colors used. If the chapters were longer than just a page, it would be really easy to love and get lost in the story.