King_of_Succubus
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King_of_Succubus11mthPostedShameless author here to review. Ok so this is my first time writing a novel. The story is all good with a good storyline and a overpowered mc with reincarnation. The mid 20 chapters are little bit off, as i still haven't edited them yet. But i assure u that u gonna like the later chapters which i have written carefully. Till now i have more focused on the character development so you would notice the mc doing very silly things here and there, but as the story continues the mc's character becomes more refined step by step. That's all. THANK YOU for your support. if you would like to have some scenes edited or add new topics, then plz give your remarks on this discord group link- https://discord.com/channels/945010170629595146/945010362007318629.
- King_of_Succubus11mthCommentedCh 1 BONEFLARE KINGDOM.
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- King_of_Succubus1yrReplied to Daoist960144
Nope, this is not a joke. In ancient India many common people had achieved great strength through 'Tapasya' (meditation). Mahabharata is proof of that, you can read it online, if you get time. Although this tapasya can take longer time, unlike what it is shown in this novel. 😀
Ch 8 Previous Research Helps Greatly. - King_of_Succubus1yrReplied to Daoist960144
Yes but this storyline is inspired by hindu culture of India. Moreover the Boneflare kingdom is in another part of universe.
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Actually there is no system at all, it's just a display scene. Moreover, u would be surprised if u read more chapters that you don't need to climb the tower. Read further to know[img=Smitten].
[Congratulation user, you have successfully passed the test. This test was made to test the character of the user and you have not disappointed the Sovereign. So, hereby you get the approval to use the inheritance of the Blood Sovereigner which is the blood essence that you already have absorbed and the Bloodsoul space which contains the Bloodsoul Altar. Also, note that your destiny is fully used up in reviving you so you will only have bad luck in the future, you can only depend on your hard work and smartness to survive the future ordeals.] - King_of_Succubus2yrReplied to SanchoPanza
there are still 3 more parts.😭
In here, behind these walls, it seemed as if the world had never changed. Everyone lived their lives without worrying about anything and if it weren't for the high walls they might have remembered that out there people often died to build the peaceful life they led.... No, in fact, most of them might have forgotten that fact. - King_of_Succubus2yrCommentedWu Yijun froze, and after a few seconds, she stiffly lowered her head to look at what she was wearing. She even stretched out both hands to the top of her head, feeling the two long fluffy ears.
- King_of_Succubus2yrCommentedBai Zemin walked past her and couldn't stop the corner of his lips from moving up slightly as he whispered softly, "By the way, that's a very cute set of pajamas."
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like what?
[3]: Tianshan = Here Tianshan is just used as a reference, and it looks something like this.