In love with the system, love the tricks lol. Nice storyline and development , I'll stick around cuz I'm creating a story with a system, why not take notes from here 😉

This is where it all starts

Ya, my brain cooked kkk

I'm in love with the system, it's got nice skills lmao reading ur work will probably help me as I'm planning on writing a book with a system in it too. I'm sticking around now haha!

Trickery hahahaha

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Here for the GORE

Read all first five chapters, couldn't drop em. Interesting writing bro. I'm not usually able to wrap my head around novels with mana and element stuffs, but you made it simple for a dumbo like moi. P.S:- More stabbing! Jk but still

I was expecting a stab

They came to help, why run?

U don't say 💀

Uh oh

What the-😶

It's interesting, gonna see what's gonna happen next

I couldn't catch up with the beginning at fist but with the Wizard and Witch coming in, it got hella funny. Love the English style fr

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They are funny couples, love their conversation😹

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Nice description here

Nice for a start