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Sai_suke

Sai_suke

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2022-01-27 JoinedIndia
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  • Sai_suke
    Sai_suke1mth
    Replied to Daoist350247

    Cause I am Indian. So, you will see many Indian names in this novel.

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    My Life with AI in Mafia
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  • Sai_suke
    Sai_suke1mth
    Replied to InsaneJoker

    Thank you very much for your suggestion, and I will always keep it in mind. I apologize for the delay in my reply, as I was dealing with some exams and thinking to start a new series.

    Gilgamesh then put his staff's base on ground and the red stone came outside. This time both red and blue stone entered into the staff at once. The colour of staff now has 2 colour both red and blue evenly where one side of staff is in red and other side is in blue.
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  • Sai_suke
    Sai_suke1mth
    Replied to Mart_Ero

    Or are you referring to the scene where AI was able to send the image to his phone but was not able to access his device for information? If so, then the answer is that I conceived it as a simple chat between two friends, where they can send messages or images to each other but can't access each other's devices. Here, AI is using Arjun as a device and sent an image as a message to his phone. If you have any further questions or need clarification on anything else, feel free to ask!

    Ch 3 Ch3: Accessing Data
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  • Sai_suke
    Sai_suke1mth
    Replied to Mart_Ero

    The reason is quite simple. As I mentioned in the first chapter, it was already installed in his brain (To know the reason for how it was installed in his brain, you have to read chapter 9). However, according to the series, it doesn't have any technique or way to access his phone without his permission until now. It also asked for his permission to take control over his body. You can say that the AI only acts on Arjun's commands. It can't make decisions on its own. And as for the last line, I was not able to understand what you meant. Could you clarify? However, if you have any other suggestions to improve it, please enlighten me.

    Ch 3 Ch3: Accessing Data
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  • Sai_suke
    Sai_suke1mth
    Posted

    Author review here, moreover a logline: Starting with the first 4-6 chapters, we lay the groundwork, introducing our main character and why he end up with AI, and the reason for entering into the underworld. Following this setup, expect plenty of action and story within this mafia world. Just to be clear, there won't be any romance or harem elements in this novel. Instead, you'll find a story packed with excitement, action, and a touch of thriller. I'm not a pro writer, so there might be mistakes. Feel free to point them out or share any suggestions you have. Your support, even with small actions like commenting on chapters, means a lot to this newbie author. Thank you.

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  • Sai_suke
    Sai_suke1mth
    Replied to ChillPixel369

    There are some reasons behind it. 1. The human body contains Nano or Micro amount of electrical current which flows through neurons, so it is impossible to use it otherwise it may cause problems in nervous system. 2. At that time, AI don't have any proper information related to it as it was still not connected to any dark web(Sorry for spoiler if you still not reached to that chapter) nor did Arjun provided any data related to it. And in further chapters you may find reason behind it, who knows? However thankyou for your feedback, hope you support my work by giving your valuable feedback like this.

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  • Sai_suke
    Sai_suke2mth
    Replied to InsaneJoker

    can you guide me, how can I improve it?

    Gilgamesh then put his staff's base on ground and the red stone came outside. This time both red and blue stone entered into the staff at once. The colour of staff now has 2 colour both red and blue evenly where one side of staff is in red and other side is in blue.
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  • Sai_suke
    Sai_suke5mth
    Posted

    Author's Review: "Hello everyone, this story is a product of my vivid imagination. I'm here in the review section to kindly ask for your thoughts on your reading experience. If you enjoyed the concept, a bit of encouragement would mean a lot. If it didn't quite resonate with your taste, sharing a reason would be immensely helpful for my improvement. Thank you for your time, and I hope you have a fantastic day!"

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  • Sai_suke
    Sai_suke5mth
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    Author's review: "Hello everyone, this story is a product of my vivid imagination. I'm here in the review section to kindly ask for your thoughts on your reading experience. If you enjoyed the concept, a bit of encouragement would mean a lot. If it didn't quite resonate with your taste, sharing a reason would be immensely helpful for my improvement. Thank you for your time, and I hope you have a fantastic day!"

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  • Sai_suke
    Sai_suke6mth
    Replied to Lotus04

    Thank you for your suggestion. I will definitely try it in further episodes where there will be action scenes. However, sorry for spoiler, but he will make a new skill all by himself, by following one of Gilgamesh's technique.

    Ch 54 Robert
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  • Sai_suke
    Sai_suke6mth
    Posted

    It is awesome to read. You won't get tired nor bored reading this.

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  • Sai_suke
    Sai_suke6mth
    Replied to Saini_Raman

    It is not a dragon skill 🙂. If it was I would have mentioned dragon in the attack name. He got that skill as a reward for defeating Light dragon(which is white in colour ).

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  • Sai_suke
    Sai_suke6mth
    Replied to ANormalOtaku

    I updated it please let me know is it more reasonable now? Your reply will be great help to me

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