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Khovi_Kun

Khovi_Kun

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Well ... my imagination is vast and colourful. Let's dive into it and see what your mind can construct by what you read too

2022-01-23 JoinedZambia
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Writing

3.2h

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  • Khovi_Kun
    Khovi_Kun1yr
    Posted

    The plot is really really good and the way the author has played around with the story behind story is amazing. It's a slow burn novel and I'm interested in what lies ahead.

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    Underworld Intern
    Fantasy · Bee1429
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  • Khovi_Kun
    Khovi_Kun1yr
    Replied to Bee1429

    He tried 😅

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    Counting My Stars
    Sci-fi · Khovi_Kun
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  • Khovi_Kun
    Khovi_Kun1yr
    Replied to Bee1429

    well yes lol... she's shocked

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    Counting My Stars
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  • Khovi_Kun
    Khovi_Kun1yr
    Posted

    This book is a work of art with dynamic characters personalities and designs. Amazing story development with realism even though it's fantasy. I can also see that the author is a legit weeb with an incredible imagination. I strongly recommend this book.

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    May Death Do Us Part
    Fantasy · Bee1429
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  • Khovi_Kun
    Khovi_Kun1yr
    Commented
    Ch 5 Chapter Five - Worcestershire Sauce and Background Noise
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    Counting My Stars
    Sci-fi · Khovi_Kun
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  • Khovi_Kun
    Khovi_Kun2yr
    Replied to Bee1429

    Really? I did notice at all lol

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    Counting My Stars
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  • Khovi_Kun
    Khovi_Kun2yr
    Commented

    Okay the Foreman's I get dying by yoooooo no Mother and Father!!! That was good. No man left alive, literally.

    Ch 7 Chapter 7 : I want to end it all
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    May Death Do Us Part
    Fantasy · Bee1429
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  • Khovi_Kun
    Khovi_Kun2yr
    Commented

    Maybe a comma between the two "you"

    "Well alright, but I'm just looking out for you you know."
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    May Death Do Us Part
    Fantasy · Bee1429
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  • Khovi_Kun
    Khovi_Kun2yr
    Commented

    Repetition of "you".

    "Well alright, but I'm just looking out for you you know."
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    May Death Do Us Part
    Fantasy · Bee1429
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  • Khovi_Kun
    Khovi_Kun2yr
    Commented

    The Spelling is "whether" not "wether". I understand typing error

    "I'll speak to her when she arrives to see how far you've gone." Gezelle spoke as she picked up the dishes from the floor. "Then I'll decide wether she gets the boot or not."
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    May Death Do Us Part
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