interesting story -however there isn't that much description for the characters, as we the readers are yeeted into action, its rather quich paced, has places in need of little improvement- but a lot of potential.

don't*-doesn't*

If by short story, you some how thought that this taste-tester was the end , then your sorely mistaken. I'm a student therefore you're feedback is helpfull and due to my lack of time due to studies- you get the jist.

And can anyone tell me what the hell a 'billing count' is? As I'm rather paranoid and therefore unsure of what this means as theres literally nothing about this in the website.

why hello there- if you can help me continue this story as I am not capable of sustaining it without help- all the help is appreciated.