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Writing Quality —- Although some earlier chapters have flaws, Arthur improves his grammar in later chapters. Update Stability —- 2 chapters every month, maybe 3 if the author feels like it; he stated clearly that he would only release 2 chapters per month. Story Development --- It's a remake of an already existing story made by Darkhelixdragoon24, but the author is improving it and adding his own story to it. Character Design --- The author just puts a pic in a comment,from what it seems he cannot describe a character their personality yes their appearance nope World Background --- It's a mix of MCU and the comics, so there is not much to add Overall it's a pretty good read I would recommend reading
The Writing Quality — there's nothing out of the ordinary because it's a translation of an already existing Chinese FIC, and if you've improved it, that's fine. Stability of Update -- Story is finished. Story development—The story's development is poor. First, the MC is given a pointless system that grants other people OP stuff while giving him virtually nothing. Second, at the end of the story, he is handed two chakra fruits that would give him enough power to annihilate everyone, but he instead hides someplace in the ARK. Characters — All the characters' personalities changed, and certain things did not make sense, such as being able to resurrect every dead person. If you read near the end of the story, you might understand. World Background — Similar to Naruto's, although everyone is an Idiot to some level. Final observations — I would not really say it's great; the finish was disappointing; the beginning was nice, but it all started to go downhill afterwards. It's not entertaining; there's no storyline, plot, or anything; it's simply an Uhh type of FIC. I respect the person who edited it and the one who posted it here, but I don't believe it was worth it.
What a letdown of an ending. Despite having two chakra fruits, the MC was unable to annihilate every single Shinobi in the Arc ——- Because once he eliminates Naruto, the arc will be his, and he will be able to reject everybody. ——- I'm sure the garbage system would give him the arc, and if it didn't, he could take the system down with himself.
I really hope everyone in the Shinobi world dies so that the MC can finally move one and become OP-----The makes me think of another thing, if the MC dies will the system move on and reset everything or just kill everyone.