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World Language changes ability names to fit Skill naming conventions. But besides an in-canon reason, "Megalomaniac" is just a more unique and interesting name for an ability than just "Power Manipulation".

Unique Skill: Megalomaniac would be cool and fits the pattern of Unique Skill names being nous. "Manipulation" skills are usually Extra Skills.

Bro the narration and dialogue is really good, but is ruined by the block of text.

If an active Marine allows you to kill him does that make you stronger and more skilled than that Marine? No. Same thing with Veldora.A target that doesn't resist will obviously be easier than a target that does.

An interesting short read. I hope you pick this up again, author.

I was gonna address this in the story but since I'm not even sure when I'll continue it, I'll just tell you now. Where I'm from, school material gets pushed ahead. So materials that would be learned in later grade, gets taught in earlier grade.

Because of this comment, maybe I'll continue it.

You'll see in my Trash Collection story ideas that never made it past chapter 1, and there's a shit ton in my google doc's trash. I stopped continuing those because I lost passion, I got bored. But maybe because of your and some others's positive comment, I'll continue them.I'm not blocked, I still have ideas especially with Saki-chan and the glasses boy.

No offense, but the synopsis looks AI generated. I'm not saying it's bad or good, just that the words used sound like the result of when I tried to do it.

This is a great start. The idea of a Reincarnatir group chat is not I've seen before, though the concept feels similar to a Dimensional chat group, but I kinda hate those. Anyways, I thought it'd be cool to change the alliance name into the [Samsara Alliance] Samsara being the reincarnation cycle in Hinduism.

Minato... uzumaki? If that was a mistake, then it's Namikaze

I do want to continue, but I've just been really lazy to write properly. In the meantime, you could read this thing I've been working on: https://tensurafanon.fandom.com/wiki/Nine_Realms It is directly related to the fic and It's what I have in mind for MC's endgame form, as well as some other characters. It's spoilers, but it's better than nothing?

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I like the current progression of the story. Appreciate that you didn't overload your main character with Unique Skills, and knows the boundary between Unique and Extra, unlike most other tensura fics.

pretty low tier for an ultimate skill

god, I'm lovin it

That's true. I guess I'll make mc the exception and change the description of the other snakes.