It has a nice flow that just keeps you wanting to slide your fingers and keep going. A very interesting masterpiece

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It’s a very interesting story, the plot is amazing, a lot grammar error here and there but it doesn’t affect one’s understanding of the scene. I recommend reading this.

I think the same

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I’ll say this is a rough diamond waiting to be properly polished. The first few chapters needs work, but it’s a story with a lovely plot. I hope to see the author grow.

A vampire and a werewolf story, a nice book I would say but First! I believe the first chapter needs work. It had errors and was moving too fast. The second chapter was good grammar wise and I enjoyed it a bit I believe it is a good read but it also needs polishing. You all should give it a try

I was a bit confused here about the sudden appearance of the wolves. Please indicate in the previous paragraph