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WAR_END5mthCommented"Good morning or should I say Good evening? My summoner Ren-san. My name is Tokisaki Kurumi it's nice meeting you." Kurumi said while she's looking at me. She even doesn't care that behind her back is a 20 meters giant Monster who can snap my head in instant.- WAR_END5mthReplied to BXXGYMAN
Right... My MC is simp 🤣
Even though this is a pathetic mindset for others but for me, this is what a real man should do to the woman who should they held in the bed. - WAR_END6mthCommented"My name is Olivia... Olivia Valedstorm"
- WAR_END6mthCommented"My name is Olivia... Olivia Valedstorm"
- WAR_END7mthCommentedCh 70 Act 13: Scene 1
- WAR_END9mthPosted
8/31/23 My first review on the first chapter of my first novel... I'm still a newbie and inexperience author. Who trying to explore what is the author life looks like... I don't know where this story of mine will lead me but... I will do my best. Of course it is 5 stars! IT is my first ever book after all.
- WAR_END11mthReplied to Bryan07_Suira
Its not it is useless... In fact his hellish training Help him so much. (I don’t need to explain it... It is in the chapter seriously...) And... I’m just thinking of logical point. If he fight the demon without a single weapon there is a chance he can defeat it but there is also a chance of him dying. And if you reading this right. His stats and other skill become lower. - Also the demon is stronger than him. That is why he can’t just go and fight it by himself. Like I write in the POV of the MC fighting the demon is a gamble. And he is not going to gamble. Because. He is a coward and a coward is the one who live the longest. Yeah, that’s all of it... I don’t know why I’m explaining this chapter to you. Seriously. Read it more carefully. If you all thinking there is a holes in this chapter point it out. So I can improve my writing a bit.
Ch 35 Demon - WAR_END1yrReplied to BFiveCh 3 No segs
- WAR_END1yrReplied to Subara
Did you read it right? He watching anime, True but... It's not like he is watching it every day(Because his busy in his part time job)... He just watches anime to ease his boredom. Well... I do admit that I think I have many plot holes in this fanfic but I will try to figure it out when I writing this story.
Ch 7 Second waifu - WAR_END1yrCommentedCh 30 [Vol 2] Chapter 26: My fiancée is cute!
- WAR_END1yrReplied to Kurigohan
Yeah... It's my first book so I didn't know that there is a fanfiction and novel well I'm not gaining on this so it's alright... I'm writing this because I'm just dissatisfied of the attitude of the main character and to train myself in writing the novel. I will update this if I feel like it...
The heating stopped, and from the openings of the broken windows, cold wind was coming in unceasingly. - WAR_END1yrCommentedCh 69 Act 12: Scene 7
- WAR_END1yrReplied to Steven_Spoon
Right... Just think of it that their bus is half-buried by snow. Btw this is also the real description in the novel.
The heating stopped, and from the openings of the broken windows, cold wind was coming in unceasingly. - WAR_END1yrCommentedCh 28 [Vol 2] Chapter 24: First day as The Student Council President
- WAR_END1yrReplied to Yuri_is_Ntr
hahaha, you really made my day buddy. I won't point it out for you so think it for yourself Well, just want to say that... You really made my day buds... Thank you for that.
This paragraph has been deleted. - WAR_END1yrReplied to Yuri_is_Ntr
Ahahahaha I don't know if should I point it out for you or not... It's "literally" obvious why his stats were raised...
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