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CunningManx

CunningManx

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2022-01-18 JoinedUnited States
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  • CunningManx
    CunningManx1mth
    Posted

    Fun story, good story arc, funny chibis, and short enough to read in one sitting! Thank you Author! 馃グ

    Devil in a Suit
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  • CunningManx
    CunningManx2mth
    Commented

    Seriously, one more of this "almost telling" thing and I drop the story.

    Ch 145 ALPHA XADEN DEMANDS YOUR PRESENCE
    The Alpha鈥檚 Unwanted Bride
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  • CunningManx
    CunningManx2mth
    Commented

    That's just rather annoying and unnecessary. Seriously? Almost pulled out the necklace and then not...? That's just unnecessary delay.

    Ch 142 AN ALMOST DISCOVERY
    The Alpha鈥檚 Unwanted Bride
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  • CunningManx
    CunningManx2mth
    Commented

    So so so many typos and misspelled words. Would be interesting story, but very difficult to read.

    Ch 25 AMBUSH
    The Alpha鈥檚 Unwanted Bride
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  • CunningManx
    CunningManx2mth
    Commented

    Honestly, that was kinda clear and evident for me after that breakfast, when Cassandra played with the knife. I thought Lauren will connect the dots right there and then.

    Ch 95 The Missive
    Kissing Hellfire: Marry Me, Evil Lord
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  • CunningManx
    CunningManx2mth
    Posted

    A very captivating and interesting story, with plenty of smut, magic, twists and turns. Some lines stopped abruptly and would have been nice to know the end or just a more clean finish, but all in all a very good story that draws you in. Thank you Author!

    Knight My Lady
    FantasyLucyXiong
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  • CunningManx
    CunningManx3mth
    Commented

    Alright, after reading all 90 chapters at once, I can say a more complex opinion. The story is interesting, good, runs on a few too many lines but so far manageable. What really bothers me though is the bad grammar and/or lack of proofreading. Lots of spelling mistakes, he/she his/her changeups, punctuation missing, etc. Also I don't see an update rate, which would be helpful. The story itself has a lot of potential, and I'm looking forward to reading it, hopefully with more frequent updates. Thank you Author!

    Ch 90 What rat?
    The Black Hearted King's Swapped Bride
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  • CunningManx
    CunningManx4mth
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

    Ch 43 Chapter Forty-Three
    The Broken Soul and Strings of Fate
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  • CunningManx
    CunningManx4mth
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

    Ch 43 Chapter Forty-Three
    The Broken Soul and Strings of Fate
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  • CunningManx
    CunningManx5mth
    Posted

    Great great great story! It is indeed complete and finished, the characters are good and well developed, drawing is nice throughout, just loved it!

    The Return of My Love
    Webnovel Comics
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  • CunningManx
    CunningManx6mth
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

    Ch 34 Chapter Thirty-Four
    The Broken Soul and Strings of Fate
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  • CunningManx
    CunningManx6mth
    Commented

    wahhahhaaa (crying sounds) mooooooooore..... pleeeease 馃ズ鉂わ笍 iI just love their interactions.... and Merry Christmas to you Author! 馃榿馃グ

    Ch 34 Chapter Thirty-Four
    The Broken Soul and Strings of Fate
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  • CunningManx
    CunningManx6mth
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

    Ch 33 Chapter Thirty-Three
    The Broken Soul and Strings of Fate
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  • CunningManx
    CunningManx6mth
    Replied to SteamyWriter

    Yeeeeeee!

    Ch 32 Chapter Thirty-Two
    The Broken Soul and Strings of Fate
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  • CunningManx
    CunningManx6mth
    Commented

    Okay, the story is still awesome, only one little issue: MORE CHAPTERS! Pleeeease ... 馃榿

    Ch 32 Chapter Thirty-Two
    The Broken Soul and Strings of Fate
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  • CunningManx
    CunningManx6mth
    Commented

    Alright, it's time for me to comment, after reading that many chapters. :) I really enjoy reading this story, finally good grammar, good writing, interesting characters, nicely introduced landscape and background. Keep it coming!

    Ch 17 Chapter Seventeen
    The Broken Soul and Strings of Fate
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  • CunningManx
    CunningManx7mth
    Commented

    Just one technical comment: this book would be so much better and enjoyable if the author wouldn't switch between past and present tense .. It's really jarring and disturbing while reading... Otherwise I'm quite enjoying it!

    Ch 25 25 A Strange Girl
    Mated To The Lycan Prince
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  • CunningManx
    CunningManx8mth
    Replied to Sana_920826

    Do you know where the novel can be read??

    My Cute Concubine
    Webnovel Comics
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  • CunningManx
    CunningManx8mth
    Replied to Basya8888

    Do you know where the novel is available??

    My Cute Concubine
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  • CunningManx
    CunningManx8mth
    Posted

    I love this story so much, but I wish it'd be completed! It's not, so be warned, it stops abruptly. The story and main characters are so different from the usual plot, it's really delightful and refreshing. Does anybody know if the original work is finished somewhere?

    My Cute Concubine
    Webnovel Comics
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