I think the writer of this novel is exhausted. Just end the novel, dear writer, instead of these dilly-dally

This book is getting boring, Mr author, considering the one chapter per day sometimes none and the one chapter.. just going in circles...after about three chapters before the ML will come to play

So she(Jane) can discern the expression on others but can tell when someone is behaving cordially to the ML...it over 180 chapter yet the stupidity of the antagonists is still backpedaling making the story line to go in circles

At this point, the story line is a lot draggy with unnecessary chapters...just drifting away like in a sucking line

Who is Melissa? the story line is beginning to go in circles

How can Bella answer to what she didn't say or announce to through the news by herself .it's ridiculous

I thought the song family have cut off ties with Bella, so how can they still be that pushing for her to go out and Bella is even answering them...the story line is getting confusing now

I think the side talks or comments is becoming overwhelming

I wonder why almost all the novels these days are cycling around this concept of where the ML is hiding his identify from the FL while others knew.. it's just ridiculous

The ten years ago in this chapter is overwhelming... just like a bunch of infants reciting alphabets

The story line is becoming a bit draggy.

how can the song family just enter a villa just like that no security and to think that Chase Bella left the doors unlocked after her family coming is just ridiculous

Chapter 28 to 31 is the same

I thought it's a family member..while is Alfred sitting with the family in their family meeting..