These last few chapters manage to not only make me dislike the main character but also tamari because of how everyone acted. It felt like the author made everyone children because that was the only way he could make it interesting.

God this has been going on forever... And the annoying thing is, we all know how it's going to end. These two will probably knock each other out and that will be the end of it. These last couple of chapters were really a waste of time and remind me of that crayppy battle on the moon

Sometimes I forget this is a Naruto fanfic and I start thinking I'm reading a cultivation novel where Yuna will eventually move on to a high realm. But then I remember it's not and this fanfic that can only go for so long before it runs out of content. A fact that makes me very sad.

Satoshi is probably one of the more interesting characters in this novel so far. Despite him appearing for two or three chapters, he's pretty complex in my opinion

Translation: what does one of my only friends want? I would be happy to help.

all things must come to and end. Big sad but we knew it was coming.

That's the same with any opponent. I mean, what else are you going to do if you can't overwhelm? the whole point of a fight is to overwhelm the other. Even if you use trickery, in the end, you've still overwhelmed your opponent.

probably not, she would most likely be a glass cannon.

Again, like I've said, she could create a whole new system like Might Duy. Your views are restricted to what is currently presented to you. If might Duy hadn't created eight gates you would be saying the same thing about him. Like how might Duy could only reach jonin at best if he perfect chakra control to the limits and work on his physic but in the end would still be beaten by someone with a more versatile arsenal.

As I said, it would be hard. And saying she only uses throwing weapons is no argument. Might Duy managed to create a whole new combat system so why can't she? Before Duy, everyone thought there was no way he could be powerful, yet he fought off the seven swordsmen of the mist. Just because you can't think of a way doesn't make it useless, and your opinion of 8 gates is only high because you've seen it. Who's to say a weapon master can't have a path just as powerful?

This author trying to hide all the plot holes, lol. Not that I mind, it's just these explanations are all too close together and fix too many plot hole for me not to bring it up.

What's the red-haired guy called again? because I want that guy. He never gets enough love despite being one of my favourites characters. I mean compared to how they forced explosive boy's horrible friendship/ development with green hair boy, that guy has a really interesting reason for being a hero, a really interesting backstory, and he just has a pretty cool quirk and personality.

He literally said no yuri

Disagree completely. If Guy can prove that hand to hand combat can be at the level of Madara, then there is no reason that a weapon master can't also have a path that can get to that level.

The anime really did brush a lot of these issues aside. I know that some of this isn't cannon but sadly, a lot of it is. Even in boruto the elders were still being annoying and controlling

Rapscallion!

haa... this man really has no redeeming qualities, does he? I know it doesn't matter because you finished the book and nothing will change but still, I just want to say PLEASE JUST GIVE ME ONE THING TO LIKE ABOUT HIM

huh... anyway, hope you continue, it a really fun novel despite being so short

I thought so, but was that a change? because I don't remember seeing it.

Oh god, please not mc x bakugou!