I judge a book by its cover.
Did you just step out of kindergarten? If you think saying that something made me cringe is “borderline”, then you have a great deal of surprises in life ahead of you. Im not gonna waste my time and explain anything to you, you’ll come to realise everything soon yourself; welcome to the internet.
I am giving such a low review not because the book is so bad that it deserves a one star in everything, the book in itself is not too bad as of chapter 8 at least, if we overlook the grammar and some other aspects. The main reason is because the shameless author who seems to be, generously speaking, a little too paranoid for losing readers has been acting in quite a rude manner towards me after i claimed that i cringed at reading one review, he went on to poke his long nose into the business of the reviewer and myself despite the fact that neither the reviewer, nor me were looking for his opinion and started saying that im bullying his readers. What the f? Me? Bullying? Who hurt you kid? Was it the wall? Did you hit it when you were 3 years old? If it was, i feel sorry, but why do you keep trying to copy it? Because when i talked to you, i felt like a wall would be a better listener f f s. Anyway, he went on to delete all my comments so now i look like the bad guy which is completely false of course, if you are not convinced, go ahead, look at my comment history. Anyway I know he will probably delete this review, but what i wanted to say is simple, Author, i emplore you, please, for the sake of god and all his angels, for the sake of your readers and their sanity, go and shove and boot up your fat hole.
What do you mean, so he was literally beat to death accoring to you. And i find it hard to believe that it was done in plain sight. Plus whos attention would be piqued by a weak poor boy running away from a gang, is it a natural response and i suspect everyonenis already used to it anyways.
I honestly feel like I’m talking to a wall here. Do you listen to yourself? Cringing, in this case at least, has nothing to do with the intention of the review; its her (as indicated by the commenter) opinion and I respect that, she can write whatever she wants for all I care. In the given scenario, me cringing was done in response to the wording, especially the usage of the word ‘San’ which i have happened to come to long dislike. If you cant take critique, thats fine, I understand that too, not everyone is as mentally impenetrable as Itachi, I respect that, but what i dont respect is how you, out of context, act rudely towards me for the sole reason, i suspect, of wanting to look like a good and caring author. The commenter has seen all of the messages in this thread and has yet to announce her disapproval, yet here you are, speaking for a complete stranger as if it was yourself. Ever heard the quote “Dont put you long nose into other peoples business”? what youre doing under the guise of being nice is putting you nose into our conversation and then blowing your snot all over the place turning a simple exchange of words into some sort of circus.
🤨 me? harrassing? I am plainly stating my opinion. Sure, i wont comment on your novel anymore since you dont like it, but i find it rather rude that you butt into our conversation given that he has not expressed any disapproval of my words.
What i meant is he didnt want to attract attention and could hterefore just run or lure hem to a secluded location, but yeah, i dont really have a problem with what you wrote, just slid in a little comment.
Lol, writing a big paragraph to my every comment. Dont mind my little critique, I just tend to write what i think sometimes, not saying your novel is bad; so far, except for the grammar, its going pretty well, i like how the character, unlike most of what we see today, is on the colder side.
Bruv, why are there always hidden experts roaming some desolate woods ffs. Like in every cultivation novel you see one.
And here I was, wondering what a divite tagger was… turns out it was a dagger…
Now he just needs a deathnote.
A ninja would not make this mistake (exception: naruto).
Consider using apostophies: ill and I’ll or well ans we’ll are different.
Yeah i agree, i dont think the description is cringe, but the way he responds by calmly saying “next” is though not exactly cringe either, but does feel a little odd. From what i know, Itachi doesnt often speak and as you earlier said his goal was not to beat the kids up, so why instigate them. Sounds like an anime moment.
Spinning back kick seemes like showing off and would be ineffective if you look at the situation objectively outside of just resding for fun; id say he should have just done a cross.
Is this peerless martial god fanfic or something?
Was supposed to be *Great demon king* instead of just great king, but oh well.