EldritchBlade
I love martial arts and fantasy fiction! Check out the book I'm co-authoring with Hamapo, "Zombie Survival System".
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EldritchBlade2mthReplied to LEONOFZIONCh 22 Recovery- EldritchBlade2mthReplied to Solomon27Ch 21 Hunter Paradise
- EldritchBlade2mthReplied to xLeafx
Yeah, that's part of why it'll take so long for the plans to come to fruition. If there aren't already cities in a location, there's probably a good reason for it, lol.
The White Zone was generally a good place to live, aside from the enormous overpopulation problem. There were huge initiatives to start new cities in the middle of the vast wildernesses of Alaska, Texas, and parts of Canada, but these were many years from coming to fruition. In the meantime, the streets were packed with the homeless, most of whom had once been wealthy immigrants. - EldritchBlade2mthReplied to banana123aregood
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"But you all know that. Fame. Fortune. Power. All of that. Here's one thing the media won't tell you: most Hunters die violently before the age of thirty." - EldritchBlade2mthReplied to xLeafx
Alexandre's evil alternate personality who sometimes takes over his body to grand him incredible regeneration (he made a contract with the Typo Devil 😔)
Alexander was both angry with himself for falling prey to Claire's attack and also disappointed with the loot he'd retrieved. A little money and water was better than nothing, but not worth the wounds he'd sustained… even if they were already healing. - EldritchBlade2mthReplied to Daoist_Red_Dust
Sorry to reply to an old comment, but for the sake of people currently reading this conversation: you're misunderstanding the bracketed text. "+50%" means "add 50%," not "multiply by 50%." If the "+" hadn't been in the brackets, then you'd be correct. -Editor
║ ╰╼[Energy] : 3000 (+50%) x2 = 9000 - EldritchBlade3mthReplied to banana123aregood
loool
All at once, the thousands of swarming Hunter candidates began their mad sprints across the field. - EldritchBlade1yrReplied to Cael09
Thank you, lol
The plain fields faded from their sight and they were thrown into a whirlwind of colors. The very next second, they found themselves in another outdoor area, this time an empty wasteland. There was no sign of life nor greeneries. - EldritchBlade1yrReplied to edu_rodeiro
That is a hilarious mental image, lol.
In the nine years since the first generation had appeared, Hunters had become real-world superheroes. They were treated like Hollywood stars and many of the veteran Hunters had become incredibly rich, driving fancy sports cars and marrying beautiful women. - EldritchBlade1yrReplied to ASKeeling
Yup. Optics and politics are everything.
The Genesis Project had been one such method—and had been heavily subsidized by every remaining world government after the entirety of Afro-Eurasia fell to the Great Wave. In the face of total annihilation, the world had thought nothing of using children as the subjects in new biotech experiments. - EldritchBlade1yrReplied to ASKeeling
Hopefully it wasn't too distracting, lol.
"Nevertheless, Dr. Goldberg has been found guilty. The Supreme Court—which at first seemed unwilling to even accept the defendant's petition for certiorari—has finally rejected the doctor's appeal at the highest level. In addition, the President, despite the will of the people, has chosen not to pardon Dr. Goldberg." - EldritchBlade1yrReplied to edu_rodeiro
Lots of existing European sports cars already exist in North America, so they've probably become even more expensive. There are also a few North American and South American sports car manufacturers. Maybe they'll become more important in this new world without their European competitors!
In the nine years since the first generation had appeared, Hunters had become real-world superheroes. They were treated like Hollywood stars and many of the veteran Hunters had become incredibly rich, driving fancy sports cars and marrying beautiful women. - EldritchBlade1yrReplied to edu_rodeiroCh 1 Alexandre
- EldritchBlade1yrPosted
The dramatic setup to the story is quick, simple, and effective. The introduction to the system makes sense, and the dialogue between a moderately large cast in the first few chapters is nice. The MC isn't annoying. Unfortunately, the writing quality itself is terrible. Here's an example from Chapter Four: '" You see... I won you. So pay up!Two gold coins!" The fatty one Carrying a bow in this back said joyously.' If that doesn't bother you and you enjoy xianxia-inspired stories then give this one a try.
- EldritchBlade1yrPosted
The author's writing style is several steps above most stories on this site, so this story is worth reading for urban fantasy fans simply for that. In addition, the dialogue is generally good, though poor punctuation can make it difficult to read at times. The story world promises intrigue, mystery, and action down the line—with some good romance, too.
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Wasting no time, lol.
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