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A great novel with an incredible potential. The world building is rich and intriguing. I'm actually quite frustrated by the low number of chapters because I feel the greatness that this story can reach. It's also the first time that I've been moved by a story on this platform therefore I'm very eager to read the rest of this story (^w^)/. Keep the good work, author. You have something precious between your hands ^_^.
the world-building is nicely done, but sometimes I feel it make the story's pace a little bit slow. I hope the author can explore more about the MC first. Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter!
the world-building is nicely done, but sometimes I feel it make the story's pace a little bit slow. I hope the author can explore more about the MC first. Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter!