bro, you have a nice idea, garp is a great character and it I surely interesting to see how he will grow in Naruto. make the chapters longer and you will succeed. There are many ways to make a fantastic fanfiction in Naruto world like building a new hidden state, making him a teacher, introducing him with a golden list in the future, slice of life type fanfiction would be a nice idea too, I would surely wait for your history.

Next time I will let you know when I decide to change the writing schedule. I used to publish often, now that I got home later it doesn't pay much to write since I don't have time to read. I may be a writer, but I am also a proud reader! Starting tomorrow there will be new chapters

He is a god, but not a strong one.

It will take a while to add the signs, when translating, I removed many of these to make it faster. You know... it's still ongoing. i'll welcome you when you're back . Thanks for the comments .

The fanfic is finally fully translated, support and comment to give me more motivation. El fanfic está finalmente totalmente traducido, apoyen y comenten para darme más motivación.

more please , i don't have more power stones for today . I beg you

but will you continue in Webnovel ? I like the story but I have no money for pantreon

the world government looks dominant. I approve it

I know now what the problem was... the translation works good only from English to another languages. and it shouldn't work on fanfictions too. I must work this weekend, but I will take time for a language change.

O yeah! I have a better idea! should I translate it myself? And post it under the Spanish part ?

I mean in English. Of course

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I changed it . try it again please, if the Story keeps having problems, i will look for some help

pero sigo siendo un vago, una vez cambié lo que me moleste ignorare más o menos el resto.[img=Speechless]

algún día cuando os aburra el día, comprobar capítulos anteriores, los actualizaré al volver a repasar la historia o lea comentarios de gente confundida , créanme , es necesario, hasta yo mismo me preguntó por qué no corregí las cosas en su mlomento, por qué se lee fatal

it is a Google translation XD, if I write it myself, you wouldn't have understand most parts of it, and what is the Mark you were speaking about

more chapters please