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Onefecta11mthPostedI've been following Twitchy_ since about Chapter 100 in their other book, Survival Evolved: Incarnation, and let me say, Twitchy doesn't disappoint. Flesh Corrupted is a brilliant story so far, only being 32 chapters since I started to read, about a young boy who slowly adjusts to the zombified world and has his own problems. Sure, there might be a few clichés, but that doesn't make it bad. I love it so far, and you should read it too.
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This might be spoilers but will we ever see the cause and how the zombies work in this book? Whether it's soon or later
I was only judging the stereotype based on what I saw. They weren't aggressive, but what was that man doing staring at the army? Was he planning to fight them? Did he just want to talk? Was he trapped in his own body, unable to communicate? - Onefecta11mthCommented
Swapping shoes isn't talked about enough in shows like The Walking Dead
As an arts and crafts project a long time ago, I took a picture of Dad, Mom, and myself printed on a CD and had it in my room for the longest time. I brought that picture, some clothing, some water, and then a pair of shoes. - Onefecta11mthCommented
but the military is literally surrounding them?
"I don't like this one bit... everybody, pack a suitcase, we're going somewhere else," Dad said, pushing past everybody to go back to his room. - Onefecta11mthCommented
He's talking about Call of Duty zombies here, right?
"Come on, everybody in this country knows what's going on. This is the zombie apocalypse. This is what we all have been waiting for, right? All those kids who survived those rounds in zombies are jumping at the bit to get some action, but they don't know how terrible it really is. Some of those soldiers probably played those stupid games," Niko said to Dad. - Onefecta11mthCommentedCh 2 January 6th, 2020
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Or maybe he's dead!
As a mere child, I didn't understand their unsolicited aggression. This man was unarmed, just walking toward them. Maybe that man needed help. - Onefecta11mthCommented
So cool that Minecraft exists in this web novel
"That's right, what do you plan to do for break? I was thinking we should start another survival world in Minecraft. We could play it until our sick break is up and see if we can beat it," I proposed the idea to Cody. - Onefecta11mthCommented
Inspired by Covid 19?
On our way out, toward the buses that would take us home for the day, Cody and I slowly walked out of the building, saying goodbye to all of our favorite teachers for our '2-week break to slow the spread'. - Onefecta11mthCommented
This is a really good opening, I look forward to the rest
There is still hope for the human race, so long as there are good people, this world will come back, just like the dead do. - Onefecta11mthCommented
Leon Weiss is such a cool name
My name is Leon Weiss. If you're reading this, it means that the human race somehow survived and was able to pick this note back up and read the contents. - Onefecta11mthCommented
Twitchy made a new book?!
As the blood trickles down my dirty face, making the carpet underneath me soggier, I picked up a pencil from the chair beside me, and a notebook I kept in my backpack. - Onefecta1yrCommented
Ellie!
"There's a lot I need to explain to you, but I need to hear you tell me that we're friends. I feel that rage coming off of your stare, it's weak but still unsettling." She told me. Who was this girl? - Onefecta1yrCommented
Oh he's staring at the other white stones right?
I felt malice, something like Lia gave me in our tent the first time I met her. That was it… it was malice I felt from Dante and her… Lia… I'm going to make her death so painful... Domin's will look like a joke. - Onefecta1yrCommented
Deserved
"I-I think he just broke my ribs." He said, spitting up blood. - Onefecta1yrCommented
WHO SAYS THIS LOL
"Serves you right! That's what you two get for messing with Ullr!" Richard said. - Onefecta1yrCommented[System Alert! Corruption at 85%]
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Domin commented on the girl with the weird hair just like Dani earlier on is it the same girl?
"This is going to sound crazy… but… I can see us as children, Sky. We're running around and playing with some sort of toy… and there's a girl… her hair… I've never seen anything like that… Sky, are you seeing this?... Are you here?" I gripped his hand, reaching out to me. - Onefecta1yrCommented
Did you have to go that in depth
Domin's eyeballs were hanging from their sockets, clumps of his brain slowly pushing out from his head out through his eye sockets, along with a torn-up chest. When I concentrated hard enough, I could see his lungs expand while he took his shortened breaths. - Onefecta1yrCommented
Dante sucks
Ellie only used a short sword against him and was able to take all of his attacks, defuse them, and land a slice on his chest.