If anyone bother to read my comment i just want to mention i missed clicked the meme!!

Bruh, i hate the reason: " CaUSe MAdaRa". As far as everyone is concerned mc is stronger than nagato it make no sense for him to claim he can't go now, literally everything is better or the best reason, just tell them to f*k off, hiruzen can't do a lot, no reason to give them info (i read the original the side plot of hiruzen knowing about madara in the backround leads no where) And lasty, you have to make your mind about the strength of mc, one moment the mc can casually destroy the perfect susanno the other he is much below madara and hashirma (hiruzen is not impressed by his strength since he already saw madara and hashirma fight before and mc claims he can't defeat all 5 kage despite madara casually defeating all of them) Just make your mind either he is beyond (which would make sense) or below...

okey i might have been wrong in not explaining myself so ill do that, uchiha clan is messed up, they have danzo who wants to kill them on the inside, orochimaru who want there sharingan (later less relevent but at the time of the promise, orochimaru could fight mc) and obito who want to further weaken konoha, so by extention mc is offending all of them, this is a dumb idea. Although later shisui become a powerhouse and mc already at war with aktsuki so it doesn't matter. Dragon vein- mc been there to search in his own eyes and sand and konoha been searching dragon vein if they did not know of the tailed beast level of senjutsu in it, it's a major plot hole , although it's mostly a weak argument so i don't care too much on it. caged bird seal is absultly relevent as it's one of the thing mc clears from the get- go that can kill him without being able to resist (assuming his tensigan is not open and he doesn't open it) no matter how you look at it it's a dumb idea to have it and not try to break it, if he could break it, he might become leader of hyuga and solve the plot *cough* reason he needs funds. you didn't adrass some of them, like leaving konoha and danzo (i'll let dazo slide thou as you might have not read the original)

bruh.. promising to help uchiha, not researching dragon vain, not learning sage mode earlier, staying in knoha, blindly storming to amegakure, letting hiruko and shino do anything they like (tho should mention he did go after shino later), letting obito get dms despite all sighns showing obito need to get stronger, using is mediocre seals as a suprise attack on nagato, not breaking from bird cage seal (i read the original and i know why, but there is a whole chapter about him being like "hmm.. this slave mark is kinda intersting maybe ill look in to it..") i can go on but i think it's enough to get my point.

I can't understand the value of this fanfic honestly.. It's the exact same as the original chinese fan fic but worse since it's so much slower. For example, in this chapter i thought you would break away from the orginal and give him sage mode tensigan and from there lead it to a diffrent and better direction but it looks like this is not what you want.. over all, this fanfic was realy cool at the begining but as soon as the amegakure arc came around everything became unbearibly slow and boring the mc feels so out of place and isn't as smart, each and every chapter feels like the plot need him to be stupid, there is also the problem with lack of death in here (no izanagi) and it looks like nothing have consequenses. It does have some cool moments that the original didn't but still the worst version of the two. Am I the only one who thinks that?

Is it just me or this chapter is tiny..

Good now change the raws and don't let him escape because some plot

I would've loved to see a dragon sage mode but, I think it's unlikely as the author already made the connection between otsusuki and golden byaqugan( kuruto's sage mode). Even then I would like it if his sage mode won't only be an increase in strength and chakra but also will give him some really powerful technique so he won't be completely helpless in face of space time ninjutsu, it would also make it better, as right now there is essentially no different between sage mode, toyotama mode except how it look. And also the hardcore fan I am gotta mention this, sage mode in the anime is ten times increase to all stats (you can take as much nature energy in ratio to your own, and fodder characters can take ten times their amount) if the author will take this approach it would really be something worth reading..

I have to ask, what are his sage abilities (if there are any unique ones)? This is much better than the raws where he didn't have sage mode till like 50 chapters before it ended.

I have to say, isn't it just stalling for time at this point? As you said in previous chapters, fuijin is comparable to the main body without tensigan and at the very, very least main body is comparable to tendo pain, who almost one shot orochimaru... I mean yea, orochimaru got edo tensei and so on... but come on even in the story it's stated that the edo hokages are nowhere near their prime, and with the lore of the story and canon shouldn't be as strong as they were against the third Hokage, shouldn't fuijin just one shot him? like he got no real reason to worsen his condition by using dead bone pule... Another thing that I struggle to understand as a whole is the inconsistency there is in the goals of the main character such as: "wanting to be homage" -but there is no benefit for him or a decent reason either than the promise he made to shisui. "having to save his team to build loyal subordinates" - but admitting himself that kotoamatsukami is better. "having to give a soul to ryomuku (can't spell it artificial tailed beast)" - despite that when he broke fugaku genjutsu he heard ryomuku as a child voice guiding him, implying there already is a soul. it could be just me, but I would like a better explanation, I would also love different mini stories about how the Hyuga clan sees him and the strength they know of... further use of ryumyaku would be nice, like more than a senjutsu battery or yamta no Orochi style... overall, I really like this fanfic and I read it multiple times, the storyline is great the characters are fantastic.

Since when is shisui aware of the tensigan?