Jon_Kade
I remember floating in an endless void of reality... It was beautiful... But most of all peaceful
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A Harem *****
Yessss I can't wait for him to become something like a brother to Aron yo
Wait until he shares a bath with Aron eheheheheheheh
Love the slow pace sometimes, a novel shouldn't be all muscle and brawn , chapter in chapter out, it'll get repetitive and boring and will have your novel become a snooze show just to pass time, adding somethings that are well thoughtout like this and a few more surprises along the way and showing proper character development is the way to go , Aron can't be some omnipotent being every other chapter just because some people feel like that's how it should go, this is your novel my friend and what you choose to do with it is up to you...don't get discouraged by some brain dead people on this app
It's called maturity to not act on impulse just because some dimwit did some you didn't like
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