A tradução é muito boa, continue com o bom trabalho ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

A very good story, the quality of writing and character development is far above average on the platform, I hope you don't give up on the story and keep up the good work

As it is, it's very good.

Short

Eu acho que você pode usar a IA e corrigir os nomes dos lugares e pessoas manualmente.

Gostei mais no ambiente retratado pela visão de Lucius, eu acho que abre mais oportunidades se você quiser detalhar uma cena.

Melhor fic de Danmachi atualmente na plataforma. Além disso, é raro encontrar um autor brasileiro aqui com essa qualidade de história, parabéns mano.

He killed the vampire lol I thought he was looking for a vampire to get the blood.

Exp

a man of culture

Man, I have the same feeling too, but this author has done this before and it wasn't, so it's just a case of waiting

finally a fanfic of Martial World

yea

exactly, there is no logic in him becoming a devil, he has the system to gain strength and it was just Draig changing his body little by little then he would be a dragon sooner or later.

I'm here for snu snu...

I know it's been a while since this chapter, but I'll comment anyway. Author don't mind those people who say the bucket wasn't funny, I laughed a lot in the last chapters, the same joke will never please everyone, keep up the good work.

Your keyboard must have a problem, I can only read "mimimimi..."

I see a lot of people commenting on Pagma's Descendant class, but you have to remember that this class itself is weak, it only becomes t9rn strong because Grid had terrible luck and it took a long time to create the 3 legendary class weapons, it was said that it was never the intention of the creators of the game to make such a strong class, it was to just be a legendary blacksmith with some sword skills.

I checked your profile and it seems you are a very bad person, you only write offensive things in any novel, I haven't seen a positive comment from you or a valid review, not to mention your spaws in this fanfic, it seems like you care so much about this story that you make a comment on every new chapter, really pathetic.

Reading after the rewrite, I thought it was fine before, but reading this new version makes more sense and leaves a wider range of possible scenarios and interactions. Make him get that hot Brazilian I forgot the name, I'm from Brazil by the way, Thanks for the chapter and don't drop it please.