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This story was an amazing read with the adaptations being splendidly done, the writing quality was terrific and hadn't found a single grammar error. The updating stability is a bit bad... But, I understand the reason why and I thank the creator for making this masterpiece before ascending. The designs of the characters are amazing and helped me visualize what they look like without any inconsistencies in their images. The story development was well done, not being overly powerful in an instant and has shown slow progress to the point where he was now.
Amazing is all I'm gonna say, the writing quality is good, the updating stability satisfied me dunno bout the others though, the story development is still early for me to decide but with the current progress I'm sure I'd be amazing. Honestly, the story is good with my current standards. My standards went down due to Wattpad, I can barely find any good stories there as well as here now since it's slowly turning into another Wattpad. Of course the actual stories in Wattpad as well as here are amazing done [I ain't talking bout fanfics]
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While some of the criticism can be ignored, the others such as his grammar need to be improved upon along with his spelling. But your mostly correct, the grammar and spelling mistake can just be fixed with ChatGPT if you're lazy to do it yourself. If he or she listens to everything then some would be dissatisfied with their stories and give their OWN opinions which the Author would listen too which will start a cycle destroying the story. Of course both grammar and spelling mistakes could just be because his first language isn't English.