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Dave_Zed

Dave_Zed

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2022-01-06 JoinedGlobal
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  • Dave_Zed
    Dave_Zed3mth
    Commented

    I hope that there’s not a chapter for every single one of the 10 people

    Ch 92 Counting the Experts in the Human World (5)
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    Max-Level Learning Ability: Facing The Cliff And Repenting For 80 Years
    Eastern · Girl In Short Skirt
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  • Dave_Zed
    Dave_Zed3mth
    Posted

    I was enjoying the book, but after chapter 100, it seems that it switched books in middle, same character name but different story

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    Cultivation: I Can Add Descriptors To My Body
    Eastern · Heartless
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  • Dave_Zed
    Dave_Zed3mth
    Commented

    I feel like there is too much details on the fights and monsters, as opposed to the theme of being the system owner and merchant

    Ch 29 Night Approaches
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    Astral Merchant
    Fantasy · PsionicMind
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  • Dave_Zed
    Dave_Zed4mth
    Commented

    He’s busy complaining how unfair it is, while he’s perfectly fine being one of the deathtroopers

    Ch 4 SECOND LIFE
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    No Skills, No Limits: Conquering the Apocalypse
    Fantasy · Wateristubeg
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  • Dave_Zed
    Dave_Zed9mth
    Posted

    The plot and mc is fine, but the story is too annoying. The MC is constantly having his plans ruined by annoying side characters.

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    I Hide And Farm In The World Of Cultivation To Increase My Proficiency
    Eastern · Flying Fatty
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  • Dave_Zed
    Dave_Zed10mth
    Posted

    Similar to Top Tier Providence, yet different

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    My Descendant Begged Me To Help Him Just After I Became A God
    Eastern · Let me laugh
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  • Dave_Zed
    Dave_Zed1yr
    Commented

    Silly question here. What happens when he runs out of bullets?

    As for why he didn't purchase more magazines, Alvian felt it was unnecessary. Since he had never missed a single bullet, it would be a waste to buy more.
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    Ultra Evolution
    Sci-fi · Typhlix
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  • Dave_Zed
    Dave_Zed1yr
    Commented

    I was hoping this wasn’t the case. I don’t like novels where the MC has a shackle from the beginning like this, where he needs to get powerful all in order to revive someone. I was hoping he would start with a fresh start. All in all, the writing is good, just not for me. Good luck author!

    Ch 22 Amethyst(2)
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    The Arcadia System
    Fantasy · Purple_Khaos
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  • Dave_Zed
    Dave_Zed1yr
    Commented

    How does he know then?

    Wain had already evolved once, and the next time it would happen again when he reached level thirty. Wain didn't know what would occur then. No one in his world had reached that level as far as he knew. Only one person had managed to get to level twenty-five in a few months, and that was the maximum.
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    Nameless King
    Fantasy · Arlemit
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  • Dave_Zed
    Dave_Zed1yr
    Commented

    There was never a reason given for not using his stat points

    Status Points: 21
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    Nameless King
    Fantasy · Arlemit
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  • Dave_Zed
    Dave_Zed1yr
    Commented

    It feels like the comment section bled into the novel itself

    ''''FUCK YOU SIMP!'''' I and the young girl shouted at the same time.
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    Martial Arts System
    Action · Alekzi
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  • Dave_Zed
    Dave_Zed1yr
    Commented

    It’s really annoying to have your mc constantly manipulated with him not knowing anything. I see that this is the trend of this book

    Ch 113 Plans
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    Cosmic Peak
    Action · LivingVoid
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  • Dave_Zed
    Dave_Zed1yr
    Replied to Ancient_Egyptian

    Maybe they are all first gen

    In these years the population reached 130 members. And they learned many things like covering their important parts with leaves, made small huts, and eating!
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    Ancient Father of Cultivation
    Eastern · ChanduGod
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  • Dave_Zed
    Dave_Zed1yr
    Commented

    This is getting a bit too much. How long is this fight going to last? All these chapters and it’s still in the middle of the same fight

    Ch 187 Close Your Eyes To Wake Up
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    The Laughing Swordsman
    Fantasy · Disgrace
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  • Dave_Zed
    Dave_Zed1yr
    Posted

    The writing quality is pretty good. Although it’s a bit confusing when describing the inner dialogue. The story flows at a nice slow pace, no plot holes. My main issue is I read up to chapter 50 and the FL has yet to make any significant decision in her personal life. She doesn’t at any point really have a personal choice in what happens to her. Her character doesn’t bother me really, besides for a little over thinking, but the story developement makes for a very passive MC. I prefer a more active MC. Although this might change later in the novel. Thanks for the read

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    The Forgotten Ability
    Fantasy · Xela_Stone
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  • Dave_Zed
    Dave_Zed1yr
    Posted

    The premise was great and so was the world building, but the mc is a bit too dumb. He keeps on making the same mistakes again and again. Besides that, he just keeps on staying with the humans for no reason just to keep on getting caught. I quit when he agreed to be a slave at chapter 160

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    The Ruined Death Knight
    Fantasy · Allenheim
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  • Dave_Zed
    Dave_Zed1yr
    Replied to jojohardball

    Pretty sure it’s from Psalms, written by David a Jewish king

    You need not walk through the valley of the shadow of death with me, for unlike an omnipotent deity, I cannot guarantee you will fear no evil."
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    Super Necromancer System
    Fantasy · John_Doever
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  • Dave_Zed
    Dave_Zed2yr
    Replied to Error_4

    Analytical doesn’t need to be so smart, he can slowly think about his situation. Also, he doesn’t really remember anything, he is pretty much a newborn now

    Now, however, I had to think hard about resolving my current situation. I was focusing only on restoring myself to peak state, but now that I'm almost there, I should try to analyze the situation and my options. Although I had no clear memory of my past life, I could vaguely recall that I used to rely on my analytical mind many times.
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    The Last Primal
    Fantasy · Shaele
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  • Dave_Zed
    Dave_Zed2yr
    Replied to Tomorrowceases

    Thanks for the reply. (it was just an off handed comment as I was reading, lol) Btw, good job author on portraying a newly born consciousness’ thoughts and growth, a very interesting concept.

    Ch 45 Carefree demeanor
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    My Parasite Skill System
    Fantasy · Tomorrowceases
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  • Dave_Zed
    Dave_Zed2yr
    Posted

    All in all, it was a very interesting read, a really chaotic evil mc. Until Yura came into the picture and it completely broke the immersion for me, every time time she appears he acts completely out of character without her adding any value at all. I understand it might change later, but after a few times I couldn’t keep up the interest

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    Monarch of Darkness, Arsene
    Fantasy · Lord_Damocles
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