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DaoistkkxVdx

DaoistkkxVdx

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  • DaoistkkxVdx
    DaoistkkxVdx1yr
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    Its been decided Harem it is

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    DaoistkkxVdx1yr
    Replied to David_Aguirre_0691

    Thanks for the encouragement

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    DaoistkkxVdx1yr
    Replied to Tenzing_Choeying_5139

    Funny thing is this is the second try but thanks anyway.

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    DaoistkkxVdx1yr
    Replied to God_of_Failure

    Thanks for the encouragement.

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    DaoistkkxVdx1yr
    Replied to DaoistkkxVdx

    changed to TBD To Be Decided Thanks for noticing the mistake.

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    DaoistkkxVdx1yr
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    To be considered

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    DaoistkkxVdx1yr
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    Gonna start again had a great idea

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    DaoistkkxVdx1yr
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    I am gonna rewrite this chapter and take it in a new direction

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    DaoistkkxVdx1yr
    Replied to Daoist444336

    Do you want to focus on any female characters or just any woman is fine

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    DaoistkkxVdx1yr
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    This might feel like too much focus on just chi but right know MC is peak human condition and just above that due to the reagent given to him from the ancient one but as he grows stronger the less time it will take to do stuff so it will take a sort of snowball effect until it wont take any time at all.

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    DaoistkkxVdx1yr
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    Are there any you want me to focus on or just in general

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    DaoistkkxVdx1yr
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    Not to rude or anything but its a bit freaky that people are reading this and not giving me any opinions. Cause you can tell me what you think. It just feels a bit weird. Not that you have to comment or anything. Not to pressure anyone.

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    DaoistkkxVdx1yr
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    This is gonna be my first piece of writing and hopefully not the last so I hope that we can both enjoy this experience together. This might be bad in the earlier chapters cause I have no idea where I am going with this but in time may get better (fingers crossed)

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    DaoistkkxVdx1yr
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    Shorter chapter cause I might next chapter might be a longer one. Also if you have any advice on writing a dynamic fight scenes it would be greatly appreciated.

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    DaoistkkxVdx1yr
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    I know this is probably wrong and stuff but I hope you can suspend your disbelief a bit and just accept the nonsense. Sorry If I offended somebody.

    "Enough of that silly hollering and those shambolic moves we wont be doing that here or ever "said the Ancient one as he started float-levitating as he struck a bell so a servant boy come get him some tea." What we are going to be focusing on are stances. Now picture every moment in your life as a picture. As you compile those pictures at a fast pace you get the sense of motion. Lets say you kick something, you are technically in a stance. Everything is a stance if you look at it in a certain way. That is the philosophy behind our martial arts here and that is what I will be passing on to you. We will be starting simple and move on to complex and back on to simple. There is a stage above that but we don't have to worry about that right now."
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    DaoistkkxVdx1yr
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    I am gonna switch to first person cause third person is making my head hurt and I think it is causing confusions.

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    DaoistkkxVdx1yr
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    I just realised I changed tenses like halfway through

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    DaoistkkxVdx1yr
    Commented

    Bestiary is something I am trying. Also thanks to the person you gave me something. Don't know what it is but thanks. But honestly don't give me anything.

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    DaoistkkxVdx1yr
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    I will endeavour to make sure at no point to make the protagonist handsome not cause I have anything against it but feel it a moral obligation to do so. If I waver may I step on step on Legos for a year.

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