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mjm303mthCommentedOnly him can hold himself on his own while in danger
And I just stood there with her voice ringing in my ears like the trumpets of armageddon. I might be more like him than I had imagined.- mjm304mthReplied to The_All_in_One
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Now, this may sound like a horrible ability. - mjm304mthCommented
I just had a thought maybe the final upgrade for the 10 shadows would be to fuse them with his body allowing him to use all their innate skills at will, at the cost of the shadows
We then proceeded on with Noc and Mir sparing with Sasuke, Naruto and I trying to get him to climb a tree with steady progress. - mjm305mthCommented
Great chapter good work, but please can I make a suggestion, donât have an arranged marriage or harem, if possible stay clear of romance cus most of the time it just shifts the focus of the story and the story never progresses, plus I donât think it suits his character
Ch 19 Shifting Tides - mjm305mthCommented
Much better pacing this time around, still a bit of waffle when it comes to chakra explainions, it would be better to exclude how technique work eg silent step and focus on continuing the story or shorten the chapters, all round very good chapter keep up the good work đđ«Ą
Ch 17 Lament - mjm305mthCommented
His chakra reserves r pitifully small it like 150 people that canât use chakra and he uses nearly all his chakra needs big chakra reserve upgrade maybe through time skip
My Chakra was nearly depleted so I dismissed them. - mjm305mthCommented
I kinda want him to be the kakashi of his generation, super skilled, a lot of internal suffering, but deep down he cares for the village and his friends but doesnât show it, but everyone knows it
Meaningless... Numbers. - mjm306mthCommented
Lots of ppl have had this crossover idea but all of them have failed to produce anything half decent, please do this crossover justice, so far everything is great and very promising keep up the good workđ
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The origin skill makes him practically omnipotent
(N/A: Guys, what do you think of the MC? Is he too Op or not? I ask this because in the world of Marvel, there are very Op characters like Beyonder, Wanda, and the cosmic entities. So, I'd like to know your opinion. Additionally, aside from the events in the movies, I plan to include some events that only appear in the comics). - mjm306mthCommented
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This book has been deleted. - mjm306mthCommentedCh 3 Before the new year-3
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First of all keep it up donât be sceptical we are all really enjoying something on here thatâs actually well written , second I think u should allow mc go to be able to use his summons attributes 4 example nues lightning or elephants water or the adaption of maghdora, also I think he should be able to pick up the reversed cursed technique for healing
Ch 14 Beyond Guilt Lies Strength/Beware The Fool. - mjm307mthCommentedCh 12 A Massacre Followed By Another
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Itâs great how human u made the mc but pls donât drag it out to much, let him have a near death gojo moment that solves his mentality
But... I shouldn't. - mjm308mthCommented
That amount of Volts would vapourizres u instantl y
Gojo once again had to defend himself with Infinity as he couldn't take that strike head on. He could heal instantly with RCT, but he wanted to see what Naoto would do when another one of his techniques failed. - mjm308mthCommentedCh 4 Tokyo