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MontecristoGT1mthCommentedRip to a young legend
Pahanin and Kabr watched as the world shifted. Every mention of Praedyth was erased.- MontecristoGT1mthCommented
Legendary Sekiro moment. I love that you’ve incorporated that here. Fitting with the ninja and all.
"WOOOOOOOOOOOOO-" - MontecristoGT1mthCommented
Well Lann will be happy that he changed something. It’ll probably take him a while to learn of it though. Considering he’s lying half dead halfway across the world. lol
The Skelliges who entered the battlefield shouted while bathing in blood. - MontecristoGT1mthCommented
Will they lose the same way as in canon?
The titan wore an eager smile, "We'll leave soon. Block out communications, no distractions." - MontecristoGT1mthCommented
Time for some police brutality from Takuma
Kon didn't want to be in Yu. He had a great position back home, handling ROOT's drug trade that funded many of ROOT's initiatives. He was in charge of the money—and that gave him power in the organisation. - MontecristoGT1mthCommented
Ego, haha. It would be fitting.
However, he tactfully omitted any mention of Peter's exceptionally high midi-chlorian count or the inkling that he might be the Chosen One. After all, he didn't want Peter to get too full of himself, and a large ego is one of the worst things for a Jedi to have. - MontecristoGT1mthCommented
Arisu, Mikoto or Maruboshi have to be the focus right?
So with a deep breath, Takuma took the step forward towards the papers and envelopes. - MontecristoGT1mthCommented
Time to prove yourself. That’s what it’s all about
"You wanted something interesting; you got it..." - MontecristoGT1mthCommented
Finally his experience actually gets him somewhere
"Your team is suited," said Toridasu. "Mitarashi specializes in information extraction, which is an important skill for the mission. Muscles here is a ranger and experienced in stealth. You have a fuin-nin, which makes her infinitely resourceful in most situations. The tiny girl and Taketori are good muscle." He then looked at Takuma. "You, of course, proved your worth as muscle—but you have relevant experience, which is important…" - MontecristoGT1mthCommented
Statikk Shiv eh. I thought Yasuo’s weapon was Stormrazor?
Ignoring the money bag for the moment, Wayne focused on the blade that had appeared. " Electric Blade? What kind of weapon is this?" - MontecristoGT2mthCommented
Banger chapter! So excited to see where this is going. I hope you don’t make her too OP though. A little bit of struggle makes everything more interesting.
[Reincarnator #1: "We'd love to welcome a new member to our admin department! We don't actually have anyone who specialises in handling finances specifically. Poor Konan's kind of been flying by the seat of her pants holding the department together with only her natural intellect and very minimal formal education. If I'm bringing you in, I can happily offer a job to Pakura as well. It'll feel strange to suddenly break my cover after being silent for so long... I'm sure I can handle it."] - MontecristoGT2mthCommented
Ahahha. Now people will really fear her
[-Reincarnator #15 has died. Cause of death: Shredded by Reincarnator #1.-] - MontecristoGT2mthCommentedCh 34 Training Part 2 - SelfdetailThis Isn't Canon! (Or that time I reincarnated into an AU-Naruto)Anime & Comics · BalancedSelfInsert
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Good description of his character. I hadn’t thought about that he was evolving into a true ninja. Someone you don’t realize is just under your nose.
But Takuma showed nothing. He didn't stand out and looked like an overworked grunt who couldn't catch a break half the time. Even with those scars of his—that by all right should make him look menacing—he seemed harmless—until he didn't. That lack of danger from him was what made him dangerous. People weren't cautious until they had a reason to be and Takuma didn't usually give people a reason to be cautious against him—so when he became a threat, it came as a massive surprise.. - MontecristoGT2mthCommented
The world ccaht is gonna go crazy after the ”killed by reincarnator 1” message. Now she just needs to help pakura and go with mimi to the dungeon
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There must be some other reincarnators who are keeping themselves hidden. It will be intreresting to see the different types of people, and how well they will do in the ninja world.
[Reincarnator #1: "Whoa, slow down there. Yes, that's one of the options, but let me elaborate first. Your first path is security. If you want to be relatively safe and among other Reincarnators, then you should sign up with the Union like you were already planning..."] - MontecristoGT3mthCommented
Maybe Takuma can learn from this guy. If he doesn’t die here of course
Ogata smashed Toridasu with a lightning-charged gauntlet but it passed through Toridasu as though he were an illusion. A cold chill shuddered down Ogata's back, and he turned to see Toridasu hurling gouts of sweeping fire in his direction—but in the exact moment before they collided against him, Ogata flexed his chakra and the fires vanished, but the danger wasn't over. Toridasu vanished in the distance and appeared beside him with a different, fully metal, folding fan in his hand. Ogata sensed chakra flowing through that metal. - MontecristoGT3mthCommented
He’s a pretty good antagonist. I wonder who will be the antagonist if he dies here by Seija’s hand
Just like that, Mishima found himself alone and confused on an empty battlefield. - MontecristoGT3mthCommented
Oohh, she’s finally interacting with the others.
One with only a single other person whitelisted to join it. - MontecristoGT3mthCommented
Interesting politics. Kind of like what happens in the real world
Even with their limited forces, the Hidden Leaf and the Hidden Cloud had just as many shinobi in the war as the Hidden Steam and the Hidden Frost. However, the official involvement of theLeaf and Cloud was limited to indirect aid—but all the involved parties knew they were actively participating, but they couldn't make it public. If two of the five Great Shinobi Hidden Villages were in direct warfare against each other, the situation could escalate to the Hidden Leaf and Hidden Cloud declaring war against each other, which wasn't something either village could be careless about. Even the Hidden Steam and Hidden Frost and their respective Daimyo didn't want to a full-scale war between the two superpowers because their war would be fought on the their land(the Land of Hot Waters and the Land of Frost)—and that was something neither nation wanted—which was why for an operation as big as the retaking the Gojiro mines, the Hidden Leaf's forces were dressed in the Hidden Steam's colors.