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thedefector1yrReplied to TechRexMany mistaken have been made but will be fixed in the rewrite.
Soon the curtain fell for the day. James ate his dinner alone in the dining hall. No one from the royal family joined him, well they had considerably higher standards, so again, no comments. And he went to the room he was provided with. James had no interest in staying here, but it was not like he had a choice. He was here to accomplish something and he would do it. Also, he didn't want to face the angry duke again.- thedefector1yrReplied to TechRexCh 1 Prologue
- thedefector1yrReplied to Gilgamesh_Official
Right. Fixed now.
This paragraph has been deleted. - thedefector2yrReplied to Gres_6708Ch 21 Weird Behaviors
- thedefector2yrReplied to Ha_5268Ch 21 Weird Behaviors
- thedefector2yrReplied to marat175Ch 21 Weird Behaviors
- thedefector2yrReplied to Joker_King_0547Ch 20 Fix - III
- thedefector2yrReplied to ABHI29Ch 20 Fix - III
- thedefector2yrReplied to WolfBoxCh 18 Fix - I
- thedefector2yrReplied to Karminica
Fixed
This paragraph has been deleted. - thedefector2yrReplied to KarminicaCh 6 Not so Perfect Plan
- thedefector2yrReplied to Karminica
Yes it's voice out.
This paragraph has been deleted. - thedefector2yrReplied to _Scarlett_DawnIt was her birthday party, a day for her to celebrate, enjoy & he ruined it. From the very day James returned, he felt guilty about this. There was no mobile or internet in this world by which he could send a message without getting intercepted by anyone & sending a letter would be too problematic cause what he was going to write, 'Sorry I ruined your party & disrespected your father because I got angry. And please forgive me.'
- thedefector2yrReplied to DeflectingBlade
P.O.V issues.
"Like I said... I don't want to. That's all. Why won't you understand?" said James in an annoyed tone. He couldn't reveal to every single person that Lina had tried to seduce him and he was afraid of getting into the same mess in Count's house. So he was being irrational. - thedefector2yrReplied to KidultCh 7 The Birthday
- thedefector2yrReplied to WanderingimmortalCh 5 His Story - II
- thedefector2yrReplied to Wanderingimmortal
Can't say.
"And that's called Pleiades, or seven sisters. That's Draco & that is Cassiopeia," Said James, pointing toward various groups of stars. As a stargazer, he had learnt about all these things from the Internet long time ago and now it served its purpose.