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Checking her pulse after destroying her heart might be not the best idea to confirm if she is actually dead.
Satisfying <3
Good writing, good idea for a story, interesting characters. Give it a try, its worth a read. I just hope that Romeru doesnt use his classic move and suddenly drops the novel. :(
He survived Shions food. Absolute Hero!
I've seen that one before!
Hey, thanks for the review. I thought about this a lot in the past few days. I don't think I will change his appearance, but his evolution and growth will be entirely different from Rimuru. I don't want the demon route that Rimuru has gone. Evolution to a demonslime, harvest festival, most abilities are black etc. So I came up with something better and more fitting for Nemu. Lets just say it will be less dark.
Still here
I am, thanks for the comment btw. Sometimes I use the german words if I cant come up with a proper english word while writing and translate it later. I guess I forgot this time.
Its just the beginning. Wanted to explain some things before the story starts.
Great story so far. Worth a read. Compared to the authors older webnovels, which I enjoyed very much, he improved even more in terms of writing, so I hope we will see something great here.