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Twisted_Kindness10mthCommentedCh 9 Insignia- Twisted_Kindness10mthCommented
hard read. bad writing inconsistent grammar. why not use grammarly it's free?
What frustrated him the most was that he couldn't move much. He wanted to move! He was stationary in his previous life that is, he was sitting on the seat on the plane and the journey was very long and died. And here he was immobile again. He wanted to walk, jump, roll and most of all travel to places the most! - Twisted_Kindness1yrCommented
he could literally train alone if he wants since he's already done it in goddess realm or she has an assassin wife by his side. don't waste time on this further it's so dumb
He decided to behave as a naive boy who doesn't even know how to hold a sword. - Twisted_Kindness1yrCommented
dropped lol
He decided to behave as a naive boy who doesn't even know how to hold a sword. - Twisted_Kindness1yrCommented
is this some kind of sick joke done or the author is really dumb?
"Riya, tell me do we have a good martial instructor?" Alex asked with a serious tone. - Twisted_Kindness1yrCommented
there is no heat in the moment, he's the only one that keeps overreacting on every single little things like he was a wimpy kid with no brain even after his "training"
Alex's face became red with embarrassment, in the heat of the moment he had forgotten about the basics. - Twisted_Kindness1yrCommented
still an imbecile, you would think he would grow mature by this point.
Alex stalled his saliva seeing the virtual screen in front of him and spoke"Yes." - Twisted_Kindness1yrCommented
pfft, wow and now we got an emotional diva. why not also put make up on this MC?
"Yes, Riya I am back," Alex spoke as tears of happiness came out of his eyes. - Twisted_Kindness1yrCommentedDroplets of crimson blood fell without end on the cold ceramic tiled floor of the hall. A ghastly silence overtook the night filled atmosphere.
- Twisted_Kindness1yrPosted
I don't understand why this novel has good ratings no R18, no harem fucking scam clickbait tags. the mc is dumb, add to that annoying dumb woman characters. his sister's is dumb too as well as his girl neighbor is fucking oblivious to the world. the MC's second life you expect him to not be fucking stupid. but no, actually that is the tolerable part. the women characters on this novel are just fucking whores sluts that needs to die miserably. can't believe I wasted time on this fuck 🤡
- Twisted_Kindness1yrCommented
how is a bunch of dumb level 1 outsmarting this SSS perception level 4 OP stats mc? I'm done goodbye. damn I just can't find a good fucking novel for once
He had considered several things as he plotted to exploit this small treasure trove but never did he imagine such an outcome. - Twisted_Kindness1yrCommented
looks like another dumb author, how this novel have 4.8 stars is baffling me
Within a few minutes, a group of players had gathered around the area, with some more still coming in. - Twisted_Kindness1yrCommentedThis paragraph has been deleted.
- Twisted_Kindness2yrReplied to _Frost_
lol found one of them
Damien was standing before the weapon rack. He already knew which weapon to pick. Without any hesitation, he chose the dull sword with his right hand. - Twisted_Kindness2yrPosted
just another Against the god parody Warning! - Annoying spirit/companion, if you don't want this, don't touch this book - - R18 tag but almost no R18 scenes, if you came for R18, then be prepared to be disappointed - - Mc is nothing special, his power comes from the guns and without it he's nothing, mind you The spirit has absolute control over him and he is treated as a lowly creature. he's also dumb fyi - - The author doesn't know the difference between mockery and teasing... - - Bad grammar and spelling that break your immersion while reading the story - good idea and concept but poor execution. advice to work on creating better dialogues, good grammar and story telling. - TIP: Treat the mc as a side character as you read this novel so you're expectations won't fail. trust me, he is suitable more as a side character, he just has no appeal whatsoever just an average Joe.
- Twisted_Kindness2yrCommented
the mc is basically powerless, he doesn't have his own powers and must rely on others? what if the spirit decided to leave him? he should've practice his knife skills and gain abilities using it and just put his points into mana so that he can use gun in emergency
Ch 23 Chapter 20: Goblin Slayer Part 1 - Twisted_Kindness2yrCommented
holsters for what? why waste time for something useless? why can't authors make an actually likeable and wise mc?
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don't expect domination in this novel
"A demon could have noble status?" she said condescendingly.