Too much chat gpt usage. the sentences are too long. the writing has too much prose and not clear such as what age she entered the world, was she born there, or direct isekai, etc.

so the Doctor Ujiko is dead?

do you have permission to post this story here?

i believe it is a rule for participants not to attack another participant. so the MC should fail immediately

is he gonna be a suspect spy of AFO?

couldn't toru just push the bomb or shout that she has touched it? or throw some dirt / rubble onto the bomb to show it?

awesome story man. so what is his official listed quirk? temporary super strength for a few minutes? with this i think after the USJ attack there should be a plot point where he is suspected of meeting afo

all quirks have to be registered right? how the fk is he gonna explain all this?

hilarious

a couple of things: 1) midoriya and you didn't graduate middle school 8 months earlier. the graduation happened after the exams. there's no 8 months break in any education system 2) a little more details and dialogue would be good. if you have not planned for Hana or the grandma to play an important role in the fic, why mention them. just put the mc in a foster home or something. 3) he got the fire quirk. where did he train it. how will he buy more quirks as once it is revealed he has more than 1 quirk, he is screwed as everyone will be after him. 4) how is Hana's quirk a secret. it's her body. kinda hard to keep it a secret as it's his sister's quirk.

SOL is good but they have gyms in UA right? why are they going to outside gyms?

are you the writer of this story in ao3? because the scenes are very similar?

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man this story is hilarious please continue these slice of life stuff. it's too good.

It is weird that it does not seem like James informed Lily of what is likely to happen during the meeting and that the Potter's are also a high level old political family which means they would do something like this. Also, given that Greengrass came prepared to sign the contract is also weird. If he wants to sign the contract, I was expecting a lot more letters / meetings / negotiations to take place before the signing and not such an informal meeting only

Will he try to upgrade recovery card and heal all might before Kamino?can he try to capture emitter type quirks in his card and store a copy? like an explosion or some acid or ice or something? will make him very versatile then.

thanks for the update. instead of buying dumbbells, shouldn't he just go to a gym?

thanks for the chapter. i like the way you summarized the usual plot stuff and dialogues we have read a hundred times. the MC finally getting the Nomu is a huge relief. Like if he didn't get it then years of planning went to waste.

really good story. grammar is very good and plot is also decent. would've liked it if he had tried to find some of the league of villains earlier such as toga, dabi, twice etc.

thanks for the chapter .please continue writing as the story is really good. although I find that he is very nerfed as he cannot reduce downtime.