not to criticise you too much author, but this sort of chapter is where most stories die. try to skip such chapters and directly get to the story. the powers can be revealed once he has been reincarnated. from the title itself we know what's going to happen so please skip the initial dialogues.

welcome back man. pls continue writing.

bro the language is getting even more incomprehensible. kindly get a better translator

bro the announcer should be using midoriya not deku lol

the excited announcer is Present Mic and not eraserhead

these other 2 characters are also OCs from Korea right? why would UA take on so many foreigners? Last I recall there was only Pony and Juroda?

you are using a lot of chat gpt. it's evident by how everything is show and not tell and there's very less dialogue. i would recommend adding more dialogue. don't narrate these things. show us scenes where there is dialogue and people are doing something. also the time skip doesn't make sense. in 10 years the mc didn't make any friends, hobbies training, etc. that stuff should be expanded upon.

Too much chat gpt usage. the sentences are too long. the writing has too much prose and not clear such as what age she entered the world, was she born there, or direct isekai, etc.

so the Doctor Ujiko is dead?

do you have permission to post this story here?

i believe it is a rule for participants not to attack another participant. so the MC should fail immediately

is he gonna be a suspect spy of AFO?

couldn't toru just push the bomb or shout that she has touched it? or throw some dirt / rubble onto the bomb to show it?

awesome story man. so what is his official listed quirk? temporary super strength for a few minutes? with this i think after the USJ attack there should be a plot point where he is suspected of meeting afo

all quirks have to be registered right? how the fk is he gonna explain all this?

hilarious

a couple of things: 1) midoriya and you didn't graduate middle school 8 months earlier. the graduation happened after the exams. there's no 8 months break in any education system 2) a little more details and dialogue would be good. if you have not planned for Hana or the grandma to play an important role in the fic, why mention them. just put the mc in a foster home or something. 3) he got the fire quirk. where did he train it. how will he buy more quirks as once it is revealed he has more than 1 quirk, he is screwed as everyone will be after him. 4) how is Hana's quirk a secret. it's her body. kinda hard to keep it a secret as it's his sister's quirk.

SOL is good but they have gyms in UA right? why are they going to outside gyms?

are you the writer of this story in ao3? because the scenes are very similar?

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