I knew it was twins! hell yeah!
Yes! New chap in one day!
This chapter is wonderful, wifey! Things are getting more interesting. And don't worry about not feelin' it sometimes, all you gotta do is to imagine the scene as vividly as you can then sit down in front of your writing application, whatever that is. Good job!
a twin? or maybe he always wish someone can exchange life with him?
coooooollll. go Elsa---er, Euphy!
eyyyyy the power's here, let's go!
ohh the evil dust already invaded her and act as the ghost of her family
Ha! I bet the girls have some powerhouses with them. and euphy is a girl and a powerhouse, the guys are missing out.
Even if I'm only 6 chapters in, I can tell there is much potential. The only thing I can critique is there are times when the worldbuilding info is put out of nowhere, rather than letting it be discussed naturally as we go along the plot. Kinda info-dumping, sometimes. But the writing style is really good, and I feel that this is a story with depth in terms of themes. Just from the start, we are already introduced to grief and loss, and social hierarchies through magic. I need more, bae. Keep writing!
ooohhh so it was all an act big sis
wut, like taking out her ear and giving it to him? or is it just like dolores from encanto?
ooofff got called sister, probably gonna trigger PTSD
Wait, this is the kid who's laughin', right? Or am I trippin?