I have read fiction's previous fanfic hp:a magical journey and can see a huge improvement in his writing. I see a lot of negative reviews saying this is slow but personally I like this storytelling of a more gritty and realistic underdog version of Naruto. Takuma as a character is just built different man, I don't understand what is so beta about this mc when mans out there like Tyler Durden in fricking fight club. A really well made main character who explores the world with us is also what makes it interesting cuz the world building in this version is really well done. Unlike other fics this one goes in depth into a realistic working shinobi society and the author really took time adding various disciplines of shinobi work and different working departments and individual factions, genin corp, police force,And nothing feels out of place. Few oc's I saw were kinda ridiculous especially in the early academy arc but mostly the side characters are either original ones or some really improvised version of few minor characters from the show. My only concern is that fiction is bad with romance or atleast was with his last fic so I look forward to seeing how this turns out.

Bro thinks he's the Prince of Persia 💀