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DaoistImmortall12dCommentedthis one hit me hard 😭
"I wish I had a mother like you," Rigel said as he looked at Kiko and held her tightly, making her comfortable in his arms.- DaoistImmortall12dCommented
i smell death flag
Rigel never thought he could sleep so well and felt refreshed ever since he entered the tower. It could be because he had a long night of talking and laughing with Kiko, a companion that made him feel alive. - DaoistImmortall12dCommentedCh 42 Chapter 41: Let loose.
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its should be left and right
Joan went left and Aaron went left, confusing the goblin leader as to which one he should take care of first. When he was about to swing his massive sword down at Joan, an arrow hit his face, and almost hit his eyes. He was furious and looked at where the arrow was coming from, and so he threw his sword at the group of archers. - DaoistImmortall12dReplied to Thakur_Abhay_3246
do you really read the novel? smh
Rigel watched the woman and he remembered her name was Vania, the one who approached him because, in his past life, nobody wanted to be in the same group as him. He was skinny and weak back then and having to be in the same group with him would only drag them down. - DaoistImmortall22dReplied to TheDarkSideCh 262 Return
- DaoistImmortall22dPosted
*this review is made during chapter 328* pros: 1. i like this book, author even make a story before our mc here is reincarnated, which is rare (other books simply does not bother to do that). 2. world building is good, so many branch of stories and background characters that can be use to spice up story in the future. 3. grammer is okay for me, english is not my tounge language anyway 4. arc progress is good, no doubt about it. cons: 1. first i said that i like author spent his time writing the background of our mc here before he reincarnated right? but further i saw how the author kind of overboard to do that. especially with his habit of suddenly jumping to an past trauma, or past memmories that happen pretty often. 2. just like the point above, i felt he sometimes 'dramatizer' and often felt a bit cringe. idk if it related to author being an indian that famous for their drama (not being racist here, really). 4. update kinda slow for a while well that said, i think author is doing a good job here for his book. and i hope he can improve too so he can be a great writer. cheer
- DaoistImmortall23dCommentedCh 325 You're the rapist? no, you are?
- DaoistImmortall1mthCommentedCh 229 The End of the Young Master
- DaoistImmortall1mthCommentedCh 273 Feeling deep down.
- DaoistImmortall1mthReplied to Troxking
nah man this is foul
Asher's response was a bored sigh, as if he'd heard such empty threats countless times before, "I'm not surprised," he drawled, "A bitch like you clearly needs some harsh training before you get tamed a bit," With that, he removed his pants, revealing a thick, monstrous member that made Rebecca's eyes widen in a mix of revulsion and fear, "Let me introduce you to my trusty 'little dragon'," he smirked, brandishing his erection like a prize. - DaoistImmortall1mthReplied to HeavenBreakerCh 271 First Stop - Tavern 2
- DaoistImmortall1mthReplied to DevilDarkness
i really want to ask about this too author, why you seems to constantly throwing flashback chapters like this out of nowhere? do you think it is enjoyable for readers? imo this chapter does not have any impact to the arc, i dont even see the correlation to the next chapter nor it is interesting enough to read. i had so much fun reading rebecca and rio being able to enjoy peaceful time and suddenly the next chapters is about past funeral. it is like when you go to the restaurant and bought a cake. when you ate it the chef suddenly changed it to plain rice.
Ch 320 His Funeral.. - DaoistImmortall1mthReplied to DevilDarknessCh 321 A murderer
- DaoistImmortall1mthReplied to DevilDarknessCh 321 A murderer
- DaoistImmortall1mthCommentedCh 321 A murderer