You made a mistake, it took Aiz a year to level up, in the original story Bell took 1 month and Aiz 1 year. Otherwise everything is great, good story although the template process is a little slow and tedious but without a doubt a great story. My 10

In the DXD world, there are some sacred gears that can be obtained after killing the owner. For example: inovate clear, telos karma, incinerate anthem, and star buster star blaster. You could take advantage now that the MC is traveling to be stronger, find one of these sacred gears and obtain them. He can also train touki and senjutsu with youkai. Or meet Ophis and have her somehow turn the MC into a dragon like the dragon god of dreams did with issei in the canon, etc... So far it is being an interesting and innovative story. The battles could be improved a bit but otherwise it's quite interesting. Keep it up and don't let it fall, the story has great potential, good luck!💥

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I don't know whether to feel happy for athos or sad for Atlas... 😓 Great story, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Muy buena historia me esta gustando bastante, pero aún hay una cosa que no me a quedado claro... el MC es un personaje reencarnado o es un MC que has implementado por ti mismo en la historia de Marvel? En caso de ser así... como conoce el MC a SHIELD? porque en ningún momento antes se han mencionado y tampoco es una organización notoria a eso le sumas el hecho de que el MC a pasado la mayor parte de su vida entrenando sin prestar mucha atención ni si quiera a su propia familia y ahora se expone que le pidió a Shuri que los investigue... para mi no tiene mucho sentido... Muchas Gracias por leer.