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This scene was exactly how I wanted it to be, I wouldn't change a thing. You can see that Gustav still loves his brother even though he is that way, so I wanted to see him congratulate him, but at the same time being hard on him, you can also see that although Endric acts like he is, deep down he is he still cares what Gustav thinks, he's just been badly influenced by society and his bad parents.
Right time? hmm, would it be when he's 18+?
What did you expect after all the abuse he went through?
Don't you get tired of humiliating your own protagonist? Are these extras not enough?