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Imperial_Guard_421yrReplied to ImperewCh 20 -News regarding the novel-- Imperial_Guard_421yrReplied to Imperew
Hello, Author here. Thank you for the continued support of my movel, even if I went on a long time without writing. It has several reasons, but the most important one is that I belive I rushed this work a bit. The way it went is that I came up with the base concept, then rushed ahead and came up with things on the fly, without putting any thought into it beforehand. I'm thinking about starting over, since I now have something resembling a coherent story, and because you are one of my long time readers, I want to ask your opinion about it. The way I want to do it, is to erase the chapters I wrote so far, then begin anew. This would mean a more fleshed out story with longer chapters, but I wouldn't start dropping them until I wrote at least fifty of them. Also these chapters would be written with better grammar, since I feel that it is a bit atrocious. I'm waiting for your opinion The Author
Ch 19 A small funeral and returning to Earth - Imperial_Guard_421yrReplied to Imperew
Another universe completely
Looking proudly to the expansion, the captain could only smile, when the roof of the communication hub opened up to release a device the size of a fighter - aircraft, with the looks to match. The only difference was, that instead of weapons, it carried a very sensitive device, which would allow them access to a faster, stronger, and more reliable way to stay in contact with thier own universe. - Imperial_Guard_422yrReplied to Imperew
Ok, thanks for the correction
Targeting first focused on a few smaller chunks leading the others, however priority was changed the moment thier bigger variants have arrived. By the time they arrived, most of them were nothing more than debree, either harmlessly bouncing of the craft's shield or missing it entirely, burning up int the atmosphere of the planet. Still it took at least half an hour before the storm of rocks passed, leaving behind a good amount of chunks, and making sure that the area couldn't be used to build anything less one risked damaging the more sensitive equipments. - Imperial_Guard_422yrCommentedCh 13 Expansion into outer space